Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve net yapmak için, 'I don't care at all in my normal life' ifadesini daha uygun bir şekilde değiştirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde daha fazla bağlaç kullanarak akıcılığı artırabilirsiniz.

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I usually don't pay much attention in my daily life. However, I do remember important things since I have some responsibilities.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı açısından bazı hatalar mevcut. 'Homeworks' yerine 'homework' kullanmalısınız çünkü 'homework' sayılamayan bir isimdir. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten my homework sometimes. But usually, I remember it before the deadline, so it hasn't been a big problem for me, especially when I was in high school.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda bazı çoğul ve tekil uyumsuzlukları var. Örneğin, 'anniversary' yerine 'anniversaries' veya 'a special day like a birthday or an anniversary' daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: I need to remember special days like birthdays and anniversaries because I have a boyfriend. I don't want to forget our anniversary, and I also care about my friends' birthdays.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve ifade hataları var. 'I don't remember via my phone' ifadesi yerine 'I don't rely on my phone to remember things' daha uygun olur. Ayrıca, 'I do have a apps for that call' ifadesi anlam açısından belirsiz ve yanlış. Cümlenizi daha açık ve doğru hale getirmek için yeniden düzenleyin.

Example: I don't rely on my phone to remember important things. Instead, I use some apps designed for that purpose, and I also write notes in my notebooks.

× I usually forget everything because I don't care at all in my normal life.

✓ I usually forget everything because I don't care at all about my normal life.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express concern or interest is 'about'. So, 'care about' is the correct phrase.

× But other things I should have to remember because you know, I have some responsibilities.

✓ But other things I should remember because, you know, I have some responsibilities.

The phrase 'should have to' is redundant and incorrect here. 'Should' alone is sufficient to express obligation or necessity. Removing 'have to' corrects the sentence.

× Yes, it was my homeworks.

✓ Yes, it was my homework.

The word 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'homeworks' is incorrect.

× I usually remember that before the deadline, so it is not a big problem for me because I was in high school.

✓ I usually remembered that before the deadline, so it was not a big problem for me because I was in high school.

The sentence refers to a past situation, so past tense verbs 'remembered' and 'was' should be used instead of present tense.

× I need to remember the special days like birthdays or anniversary because I have a boyfriend.

✓ I need to remember special days like birthdays or anniversaries because I have a boyfriend.

'Anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries' to match the plural 'birthdays' and the general meaning of multiple special days.

× I don't remember via my phone.

✓ I don't remember things via my phone.

The verb 'remember' requires an object. Adding 'things' clarifies what is being remembered.

× I do have a apps for that call and I do write my notebooks.

✓ I do have apps for that call and I do write in my notebooks.

'Apps' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, 'write my notebooks' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write in my notebooks' to indicate writing inside them.