Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'I memory all of the seasons.' Try to use correct verb forms and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence by linking ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially long-term memories like seasons. However, my short-term memory isn't as strong, so sometimes I forget small items like my keys or phone.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and hesitations that affect clarity. Try to use past tense correctly and organize your answer with linking words to improve flow. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um'.

Example: Yes, unfortunately, last year when we were going to travel, I forgot my passport. As a result, we had to return home and buy new tickets. Since then, I always double-check everything before important trips or interviews.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary filler words. Use complete sentences and explain your methods for remembering daily tasks with specific details.

Example: I am very busy, so I need to manage all my tasks carefully. Therefore, I make a checklist every day and mark off each task as I complete it to keep track of my work.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing at the beginning and contains many hesitations. Avoid irrelevant or unclear statements like 'He hasn't told before.' Use clear, concise sentences and provide specific examples with proper linking words.

Example: I remember important things by making a checklist of my tasks. Additionally, I set alarms as reminders. For example, recently I set alarms for my art exam and my daughter's visa appointment.

× I memory all of the seasons, but about the short term memory, yeah, I'm not actually good and sometimes I forget some stuff that I need, like my keys or sometimes my mobile phone.

✓ I memorize all of the seasons, but about short-term memory, yeah, I'm not actually good and sometimes I forget some stuff that I need, like my keys or sometimes my mobile phone.

The word 'memory' is a noun, but the sentence requires a verb. The correct verb is 'memorize'. Also, 'short term memory' should be hyphenated as 'short-term memory' when used as an adjective. The plural 'seasons' is correct here.

× last year we want to uh, went to travel and unfortunately I forgot my uh passport and again we back to home and uh buy the tickets.

✓ last year we wanted to travel and unfortunately I forgot my passport and then we went back home and bought the tickets.

The verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to match the past time frame. 'Went to travel' is incorrect; 'went to travel' is redundant, better to say 'wanted to travel'. 'We back to home' is incorrect; it should be 'we went back home'. 'Buy' should be past tense 'bought'.

× But uh nowadays, uh, when I want to do some important uh travel or interview, I double check everything.

✓ But nowadays, when I want to do some important travel or attend an interview, I double-check everything.

The phrase 'do some important travel or interview' is awkward. 'Travel' is uncountable and does not need 'some'. Also, 'interview' as a noun needs a verb like 'attend'. 'Double check' should be hyphenated as 'double-check' when used as a verb.

× I actually know this, I'm so busy and I should manage all of the my works.

✓ I actually know this, I'm so busy and I should manage all of my work.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or job duties. Also, 'all of the my' is incorrect; it should be 'all of my' or simply 'all my'.

× So, uh, I make out checklist for, uh, my works every day and, uh, in the end of the day, I, uh, take one of all of them if I, uh, do them.

✓ So, I make a checklist for my work every day and, at the end of the day, I check off the tasks I have completed.

'Make out checklist' is incorrect; it should be 'make a checklist'. 'In the end of the day' should be 'at the end of the day'. 'Take one of all of them if I do them' is unclear; better to say 'check off the tasks I have completed'.

× So, uh, I need to keep the my.

✓ So, I need to keep them in mind.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Keep the my' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely to remember or keep tasks in mind.

× He hasn't told before.

✓ I haven't told before.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrect as the speaker is referring to themselves. It should be 'I'.

× I make a checklist for all of my important task.

✓ I make a checklist for all of my important tasks.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items.

× For instance, nowadays, umm, I set an alarm for my, uh, artist exam and then, uh, my, uh, daughter visa.

✓ For instance, nowadays, I set an alarm for my artist exam and then for my daughter's visa.

The phrase 'my daughter visa' is incorrect; it should be 'my daughter's visa' to show possession. Also, 'set an alarm for' is correct, but the sentence needed clearer possessive structure.