Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达不够自然，语法和用词存在错误，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言说明你如何努力提高记忆力。

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I try to improve by playing puzzles because I heard they help enhance memory.

Suggestion: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议直接回答问题，并举具体例子说明忘记的重要事情，同时避免语气词和重复。

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, like missing a deadline for a work task or forgetting to reply to an urgent message.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接说明日常需要记住的具体事项，并用完整句子表达。

Example: As a college student, I need to remember important deadlines, such as when to submit assignments, because missing them can cause problems.

Suggestion: 表达不够流畅，语法和用词错误较多。建议简洁明了地说明你如何利用手机帮助记忆，并避免重复和不必要的填充词。

Example: I usually set reminders on my phone because I rely on digital devices, and it's hard to lose important notes this way.

× I'm so pity to say that I am not the person who is skilled at memory seeing and for this I just try to improve my ability like to playing puzzle, because in the Internet people said it is very helpful to remember everything.

✓ I'm so sorry to say that I am not a person who is skilled at memorizing, and for this, I just try to improve my ability by playing puzzles, because on the Internet people say it is very helpful to remember everything.

错误在于使用了错误的形容词“pity”而非正确的“sorry”，以及“memory seeing”表达不正确，应为“memorizing”。此外，“like to playing puzzle”结构错误，应为“by playing puzzles”。建议使用正确的形容词和动名词形式，表达更自然。

× I'm so pity to say that I am not the person who is skilled at memory seeing and for this I just try to improve my ability like to playing puzzle, because in the Internet people said it is very helpful to remember everything.

✓ I'm so sorry to say that I am not a person who is skilled at memorizing, and for this, I just try to improve my ability by playing puzzles, because on the Internet people say it is very helpful to remember everything.

“the person”使用不当，应该用不定冠词“a person”，因为这里指的是泛指某类人。

× Absolutely yes, but I'm not quite so sure about the detailed. I think such as the date about some job and forgot to reply some urgent message is uh, really uh, happened sometime and I think I should.

✓ Absolutely yes, but I'm not quite sure about the details. I think, for example, forgetting the date of some job and forgetting to reply to some urgent message really happened sometimes, and I think I should be more careful.

“detailed”应为复数“details”，动词时态和结构不正确，“forgot”应与前文保持时态一致，且句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的名词复数形式和完整的句子结构。

× Absolutely yes, but I'm not quite so sure about the detailed. I think such as the date about some job and forgot to reply some urgent message is uh, really uh, happened sometime and I think I should.

✓ Absolutely yes, but I'm not quite sure about the details. I think, for example, forgetting the date of some job and forgetting to reply to some urgent message really happened sometimes, and I think I should be more careful.

“the detailed”应为“the details”，因为这里指的是多个细节。

× As an undergraduate student who still study in this college, it requires me to remember the text submission time also quite important and for example, if I forget time, I estimate to to give me a very.

✓ As an undergraduate student who is still studying in this college, I need to remember the text submission time, which is also quite important. For example, if I forget the time, I estimate it will cause me a lot of trouble.

“who still study”主语是单数，动词应为“studies”或使用进行时“is studying”。“it requires me”结构不清晰，应改为“I need to”。“forget time”缺少冠词，应为“forget the time”。句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× As an undergraduate student who still study in this college, it requires me to remember the text submission time also quite important and for example, if I forget time, I estimate to to give me a very.

✓ As an undergraduate student who is still studying in this college, I need to remember the text submission time, which is also quite important. For example, if I forget the time, I estimate it will cause me a lot of trouble.

主句和从句时态不一致，且动词形式错误。应使用现在进行时“is studying”来描述正在进行的动作。

× Making a lead on my phone is very suitable for me because I so relied on the smartphone and umm in the digital umm device. It's hard to lose deferred to the node.

✓ Making a note on my phone is very suitable for me because I rely so much on my smartphone and other digital devices. It's hard to lose compared to a notebook.

“Making a lead”应为“Making a note”，“relied on”时态错误，应为现在时“rely on”。“deferred to the node”表达不清，应为“compared to a notebook”。建议使用正确的介词和词汇表达。

× Making a lead on my phone is very suitable for me because I so relied on the smartphone and umm in the digital umm device. It's hard to lose deferred to the node.

✓ Making a note on my phone is very suitable for me because I rely so much on my smartphone and other digital devices. It's hard to lose compared to a notebook.

“relied”使用了过去时，但句意表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“rely”。