Memory— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Honestly umm I am not the person who are good at memorizing this thing because umm I obtained to saying to name all people wrong right? Umm I always confuse about my friend names.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Sure. Back when I was just seven years old, I forgot my bicycle at the shop, and when I go back to home I realized that I forgot that and I go back to get my bicycle back.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
Umm, the thing that I really need to remember is umm, my credit card, because if I like this umm you know that all of the money in there is more than one 1000 buy and if I like that I will die.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
Maybe lecture in the diary book because umm, when I think I may forgot something I obtained to umm look at my diary book and at the time I will always find out what I can remember or what I missed.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์มากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำเติมเสียง "umm" บ่อยเกินไป นอกจากนี้ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและเข้าใจง่าย
Example: Honestly, I am not very good at memorising things. For example, I often confuse my friends' names, which can be quite embarrassing.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ "so" หรือ "then" เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุการณ์ นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ
Example: Yes, when I was seven years old, I once forgot my bicycle at the shop. Then, when I got home, I realized it and went back to retrieve it.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้างที่ดีขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำเติมเสียง "umm" และคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น "I will die" ควรใช้คำอธิบายที่เหมาะสมและสุภาพมากขึ้น
Example: The most important thing I need to remember every day is my credit card because it contains a lot of money, and losing it would cause me serious problems.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความลื่นไหลและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำเติมเสียง "umm" บ่อยเกินไป
Example: I usually write important things in my diary. Whenever I think I might forget something, I check my diary to remind myself of what I need to do.
Grammar
× Honestly umm I am not the person who are good at memorizing this thing because umm I obtained to saying to name all people wrong right?
✓ Honestly umm I am not the person who is good at memorizing things because umm I tend to say people's names wrong, right?
The subject 'who' refers to 'person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'this thing' is vague and should be pluralized to 'things' to match the context. 'Obtained to saying' is incorrect; it should be 'tend to say'.
× Umm I always confuse about my friend names.
✓ Umm I always get confused about my friends' names.
The verb 'confuse' is incorrectly used; the correct phrase is 'get confused'. Also, 'friend names' should be possessive plural 'friends' names' to indicate the names belonging to friends.
× Back when I was just seven years old, I forgot my bicycle at the shop, and when I go back to home I realized that I forgot that and I go back to get my bicycle back.
✓ Back when I was just seven years old, I forgot my bicycle at the shop, and when I went back home I realized that I forgot it and I went back to get my bicycle.
The verbs 'go' and 'realized' need to be in past tense to match the past narrative. 'Go back to home' is incorrect; it should be 'went back home'. Also, 'forgot that' should be 'forgot it' for clarity.
× Back when I was just seven years old, I forgot my bicycle at the shop, and when I go back to home I realized that I forgot that and I go back to get my bicycle back.
✓ Back when I was just seven years old, I forgot my bicycle at the shop, and when I went back home I realized that I forgot it and I went back to get my bicycle.
The phrase 'go back to home' is incorrect; the correct preposition usage is 'go back home' without 'to'.
× Umm, the thing that I really need to remember is umm, my credit card, because if I like this umm you know that all of the money in there is more than one 1000 buy and if I like that I will die.
✓ Umm, the thing that I really need to remember is my credit card, because if I lose it, you know that all the money in there is more than one thousand baht, and if I lose it, I will be in big trouble.
'If I like this' is incorrect; it should be 'if I lose it'. 'More than one 1000 buy' is incorrect quantification and spelling; it should be 'more than one thousand baht'. 'I will die' is informal and exaggerated; 'I will be in big trouble' is more appropriate.
× Maybe lecture in the diary book because umm, when I think I may forgot something I obtained to umm look at my diary book and at the time I will always find out what I can remember or what I missed.
✓ Maybe I write in the diary because, umm, when I think I may have forgotten something, I tend to look at my diary and at that time I can always find out what I remember or what I missed.
'Lecture in the diary book' is incorrect; it should be 'write in the diary'. 'May forgot' should be 'may have forgotten' to use present perfect tense. 'Obtained to' is incorrect; it should be 'tend to'. 'At the time' should be 'at that time' for clarity.
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