Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and coherent. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. For example, use 'I am not good at memorising things because I tend to forget quickly. For instance, when I was a child, I was scolded by my teacher for forgetting to do my homework, and my parents encouraged me to make more effort.'

Example: I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget quickly. For example, when I was a child, I often forgot to do my homework, which led to my teacher scolding me. Moreover, my parents encouraged me to try harder to remember my tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words. Also, clarify the example and correct vocabulary usage. For instance, say 'Yes, I have often forgotten important things. For example, last month I forgot my appointment with the dentist and only remembered when I received a call an hour after the scheduled time. I then apologized to the doctor for my mistake.'

Example: Yes, I have often forgotten important things. For example, last month I forgot my appointment with the dentist and only remembered when I received a call an hour after the meeting time. I immediately apologized to the doctor for my mistake and my forgetfulness.

Suggestion: Your answer should be clearer and more concise. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'In my daily life, I need to remember basic tasks such as homework from my institution and daily chores assigned by my parents, like buying groceries from the market.'

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember basic tasks such as completing homework from my institution and doing daily chores assigned by my parents, like purchasing groceries from the market.

Suggestion: Your answer should be more grammatically correct and coherent. Start with a topic sentence, then explain with specific details using linking words. For example, say 'There are many ways to remember things, but I usually use an application on my device. I enter the date and task, and when the time comes, the app reminds me. This method works best for me.'

Example: There are many ways to remember important things, but I usually use an application on my device. I enter the date and the task, and when the time comes, the app reminds me. This is the best way for me to stay organized.

× I am not a person who good at memorizing things.

✓ I am not a person who is good at memorizing things.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'who' to correctly link the subject and the adjective 'good'. Without 'is', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'who is good'. This is a common error where the verb 'to be' is omitted before an adjective in a relative clause.

× when I was child, I was scolded by my teacher because I forget to do my homework.

✓ when I was a child, I was scolded by my teacher because I forgot to do my homework.

The noun 'child' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct as 'a child'. Also, the verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame indicated by 'was'. Using present tense 'forget' in a past context is incorrect.

× Even my parents also encouraged me to do up efforts to make my.

✓ Even my parents also encouraged me to make efforts.

The phrase 'do up efforts to make my' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct expression is 'make efforts'. Also, 'do up' is not appropriate here. The sentence ends abruptly and lacks clarity. Simplifying to 'make efforts' corrects the grammar and meaning.

× it's a lot of time when I've forgotten something important.

✓ There have been many times when I've forgotten something important.

The phrase 'it's a lot of time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'there have been many times' to indicate frequency of past events. Also, 'I've forgotten' is correct present perfect tense to express past experiences relevant to the present.

× the last month I forget my appointment with Dash Taste and I remember when I received a call from the dentist after the one hour of the meeting.

✓ Last month I forgot my appointment with Dash Taste and I remembered when I received a call from the dentist an hour after the meeting.

'Forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past time 'last month'. 'Remember' should be 'remembered' to maintain past tense consistency. 'After the one hour of the meeting' is awkward; 'an hour after the meeting' is the correct expression.

× Then I apologized to doctor for my mistake and for my forgotten habit.

✓ Then I apologized to the doctor for my mistake and my forgetfulness.

'Doctor' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Forgotten habit' is awkward; 'forgetfulness' is a better noun to express the habit of forgetting. Also, 'for my forgotten habit' is not idiomatic English.

× the daily task that given by my parents such as about some how chores work and the responsibility like the purchasing grocery from the market.

✓ the daily tasks that are given by my parents, such as chores and responsibilities like purchasing groceries from the market.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'such as' which implies multiple examples. 'Given' needs auxiliary 'are' to form passive voice 'are given'. 'Chores work' is incorrect; 'chores' alone is sufficient. 'Purchasing grocery' should be 'purchasing groceries' as 'groceries' is plural.

× There are lot of ways to remember things, but if talk about me, I usually attack help from a application that available on my device and I only need to put the day and my task but whenever the time came he I mean that application remind me to do what to do and it's the best way.

✓ There are a lot of ways to remember things, but if I talk about myself, I usually take help from an application that is available on my device. I only need to put the day and my task, and whenever the time comes, the application reminds me what to do, and it's the best way.

'Lot' needs the article 'a' to be 'a lot'. 'If talk about me' should be 'if I talk about myself' for correct pronoun and verb usage. 'Attack help' is incorrect; 'take help' is correct. 'A application' should be 'an application' because 'application' starts with a vowel sound. 'That available' needs 'is' to be 'that is available'. 'Whenever the time came he I mean that application remind me' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'whenever the time comes, the application reminds me'. Verb tenses and pronouns are corrected for clarity and grammar.