Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and fluent by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason or example. For instance, instead of saying "I don't," say "I'm not very good at memorizing things." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I usually write reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use past tense correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your story coherent.

Example: Yes, I once forgot about an important exam last year. I accidentally overslept and missed half of the exam, which was very stressful.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember the time I should go to class and keep track of my daily expenses. Additionally, I try to remember important appointments.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words and avoid redundancy. Also, try to provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Example: I usually write down important tasks or set alarms on my phone to remind myself, which helps me avoid forgetting important things.

× Actually, I don't. I often forget things so I chose to mark them in my phone to to remind myself.

✓ Actually, I don't. I often forget things so I choose to mark them in my phone to remind myself.

The verb 'chose' is the past tense, but the context requires present tense 'choose' to match 'I often forget'. Also, 'to to' is a repetition error; only one 'to' is needed before 'remind'.

× Yes I have last year I need to go to a exam but I forget.

✓ Yes, I did. Last year, I needed to go to an exam but I forgot.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'I have' with a past time 'last year', which is incorrect. Use simple past 'did' for past events. 'Need' should be past tense 'needed'. 'Forget' should be past tense 'forgot'. Also, 'a exam' should be 'an exam' (article error).

× But I forgot and I slept.

✓ But I forgot and I slept.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× Sleep until the exam is half was half.

✓ I slept until the exam was halfway over.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and mixes tenses. 'Sleep' should be past tense 'slept'. 'Is half' is present tense and incorrect here; use past tense 'was halfway over' to describe the exam progress.

× Umm, for example, what time should I go to class and I need to I need to memorize how much I spend in the day.

✓ Umm, for example, what time I should go to class and I need to memorize how much I spend in a day.

The question form 'should I go' is incorrect in this statement context; it should be a statement 'what time I should go'. Also, 'in the day' is better as 'in a day' to indicate a general daily amount.

× Last but not least.

✓ Last but not least, I try to remember important things.

'Last but not least' is a phrase that needs to be connected to a complete sentence to make sense. The original is a fragment.

× I often choose to write down the things I need to do or set a alarm to remind myself don't forget to do that, it is very important.

✓ I often choose to write down the things I need to do or set an alarm to remind myself not to forget to do that; it is very important.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an' (an alarm). Also, the phrase 'remind myself don't forget' is incorrect; it should be 'remind myself not to forget'. The sentence is long and needs a semicolon or period to separate ideas.