Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise by avoiding repeated ideas and focus on a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. Instead, I prefer to understand concepts deeply, which helps me remember them better.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but lacks a clear topic sentence and could be more structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add specific examples or reasons using linking words to make your response more coherent and detailed.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. For example, despite using reminders on my phone, I occasionally forget work-related tasks when I'm very busy.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and lacks linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to combine your points into complete sentences with linking words and provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

Example: As a student, I mainly need to remember to study, pray, take care of my pet, and complete my assignments every day.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and could be clearer. Use simpler phrasing and linking words to make your response more natural and effective. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not add value.

Example: I remember important things by writing them in my ledger or setting reminders on my phone, which notify me when the due date is approaching.

× No, I don't consider myself as a person who's good at memorizing things.

✓ No, I don't consider myself a person who's good at memorizing things.

The verb 'consider' is followed directly by the object without the preposition 'as'. Using 'as' here is incorrect. The correct structure is 'consider myself a person'. Removing 'as' improves grammatical accuracy.

× Instead, I am more of a person that tries to learn every concept or detail which makes it easier to help me memorize it.

✓ Instead, I am more of a person who tries to learn every concept or detail which makes it easier to help me memorize it.

When referring to people, the relative pronoun 'who' should be used instead of 'that'. Using 'who' is more appropriate and grammatically correct when describing a person.

× Simple route learning is something that I cannot do and haven't been able to do ever since I was a kid.

✓ Simple rote learning is something that I cannot do and haven't been able to do ever since I was a kid.

The phrase 'route learning' is incorrect; the correct term is 'rote learning', which means learning by repetition. This is a vocabulary correction rather than a preposition error, but it is necessary for clarity.

× If it's something important, I most often try to remember it by writing it in a note or my reminders on my application in the phone.

✓ If it's something important, I most often try to remember it by writing it in a note or in my reminders on my phone application.

The preposition 'in' should be used before both 'a note' and 'my reminders' for parallel structure. Also, 'on my application in the phone' is awkward; 'on my phone application' is clearer and more natural.

× But there have been cases where I tend to forget something important of work.

✓ But there have been cases where I tend to forget something important for work.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'for' is the appropriate preposition to indicate purpose or relation to work.

× Since I'm a student, I don't have many things that need to be done on a daily basis except from studying.

✓ Since I'm a student, I don't have many things that need to be done on a daily basis except studying.

The phrase 'except from' is incorrect. The correct form is 'except' followed directly by the gerund without 'from'.

× But here's a list of examples that I need to remember on daily basis. Study, pray, take care of my pet, finish my assignment.

✓ But here's a list of examples that I need to remember on a daily basis: study, pray, take care of my pet, and finish my assignment.

The phrase 'on daily basis' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Also, the list should be introduced with a colon and items separated by commas, with 'and' before the last item for proper sentence structure.

× If I consider something to be material that could impact my decision, I try to remember it by writing it in my Ledger or simply putting it in my reminder in the application which sends me a notification whenever it's due date is near.

✓ If I consider something to be material that could impact my decision, I try to remember it by writing it in my ledger or simply putting it in my reminder in the application, which sends me a notification whenever its due date is near.

The word 'Ledger' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'it's due date' should be 'its due date' because 'its' is the possessive form, while 'it's' means 'it is'. Adding a comma before 'which' improves sentence clarity.