Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如"remember"应为"remembering"，"can't forgot"应为"can't forget"。回答较为重复且不够连贯，缺少连接词。建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising important things like deadlines and homework. For instance, I never forget my assignments because I always keep them in mind. Additionally, I enjoy playing memory games, which helps me improve this skill further.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，如"forget"应为"forgot"，"put on the homework"表达不准确。句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确时态和更准确的词汇，并使用连接词使叙述更连贯。

Example: Yes, I once forgot to bring my homework on the first day of a new term. It was very embarrassing because all my classmates handed theirs to the teacher, but I left mine at home. This experience made me feel quite shy.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如"couldn't forget"应为"must not forget"，句子不完整且缺少连接词。建议使用更准确的表达，简洁明了地说明需要记住的内容，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: I need to remember my daily schedule and plans, such as my study routine and any emergency information about which class to attend and where. This helps me stay organized throughout the day.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如"bring it or"不明确，句子断裂。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达方法，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Example: I used to write important things down on paper and carry them with me. Nowadays, I usually use my mobile phone and special apps to record important information, which helps me remember emergencies or other tasks easily.

× I think I'm good at remember some important things, such as my deadline or some Simon homework.

✓ I think I'm good at remembering some important things, such as my deadline or some Simon homework.

动词短语 'good at' 后面应接动名词形式，不能用动词原形。这里 'remember' 应改为 'remembering'。

× I can't forgot it.

✓ I can't forget it.

情态动词 'can't' 后应接动词原形，不能用过去式 'forgot'。应改为 'forget'。

× So I'm a good memorizer I think.

✓ So I think I'm a good memorizer.

句子结构不清晰，'I think' 应放在句首或句尾，且需要逗号分隔，使句子更通顺。

× And sometimes I play memory game. I'm good with them.

✓ And sometimes I play memory games. I'm good at them.

'memory game' 应为复数形式 'memory games'，且 'good with' 应改为 'good at'，表示擅长某事。

× Oh, I remember that Once Upon a time I forget to bring my homework, go back to school on the new term, so it made me very embarrassed when everyone could put on the homework to the teacher, but I left it on my home, so it's made me shy.

✓ Oh, I remember that once upon a time I forgot to bring my homework when I went back to school for the new term, so it made me very embarrassed when everyone could hand in the homework to the teacher, but I left it at home, so it made me shy.

描述过去事件时，动词应使用过去式，如 'forget' 改为 'forgot'，'go' 改为 'went'，'put on' 应改为 'hand in'，'left it on my home' 应改为 'left it at home'，'it's made me shy' 应改为 'it made me shy'。

× but I left it on my home, so it's made me shy.

✓ but I left it at home, so it made me shy.

表示在家时应使用介词 'at'，而非 'on'。

× I reckon that I couldn't forget the daily schedule and some of the planning with my daily routine, for example the study routine and some emergency information about which class in which place to take so.

✓ I reckon that I can't forget the daily schedule and some of the planning in my daily routine, for example the study routine and some emergency information about which class is in which place.

'couldn't' 表示过去能力，语境应为现在能力，故改为 'can't'。'with my daily routine' 应改为 'in my daily routine'。句尾 'to take so' 不通顺，删去。

× I reckon that I couldn't forget the daily schedule and some of the planning with my daily routine, for example the study routine and some emergency information about which class in which place to take so.

✓ I reckon that I can't forget the daily schedule and some of the planning in my daily routine, for example the study routine and some emergency information about which class is in which place.

'with' 用法不当，应改为 'in'。

× I used to write them down on the papers and bring it or.

✓ I used to write them down on paper and bring them.

'papers' 应改为不可数名词 'paper'，'bring it or' 结构不完整，应改为 'bring them'。

× These days I usually use my mobile phone to take down that.

✓ These days I usually use my mobile phone to write that down.

'take down' 通常用于听写，'take down that' 结构不完整，改为 'write that down' 更合适。

× Maybe use some special app to record that so that I can always remember the emergency information or.

✓ Maybe I use some special app to record that so that I can always remember the emergency information.

句子缺少主语，'Maybe use' 应改为 'Maybe I use'，句尾 'or' 多余，应删除。