Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, instead of saying "I am good in memorizing things because according to my perception I have a good IQ level that helped me in the remind my thing," you could say, "Yes, I am good at memorising things because I have a strong memory and can recall information easily."

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I have a strong memory and can recall information easily. For instance, I can remember important dates and details without much effort.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid tense errors. For example, you can say, "Yes, I once forgot my expensive watch at my relative's home last month. However, I was able to find it successfully later."

Example: Yes, I once forgot my expensive watch at my relative's home last month. However, I was able to find it successfully later after contacting them.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, you could say, "I need to remember my school schedule every day because it changes frequently, and knowing it helps me study effectively."

Example: I need to remember my school schedule every day because it changes frequently, and knowing it helps me study effectively and manage my time well.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Use correct grammar and provide a clearer example. For instance, you can say, "I usually write important information on paper because it helps me remember better. For example, I make a list of my valuable items to keep track of them."

Example: I usually write important information on paper because it helps me remember better. For example, I make a list of my valuable items to keep track of them and avoid losing anything.

× Yes definitely I am good in memorizing things because according to my perception I have a good IQ level that helped me in the remind my thing.

✓ Yes definitely I am good at memorizing things because according to my perception I have a good IQ level that helps me to remember things.

The phrase 'good in memorizing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at'. Also, 'helped me in the remind my thing' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to remember things' to maintain present tense and correct verb usage.

× Yes, I forgot my expensive watch in my relative home and it was a matter of last month when this incident happened.

✓ Yes, I forgot my expensive watch at my relative's home and it happened last month.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to someone's home. Also, 'a matter of last month' is unnatural; 'last month' suffices. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.

× But at last I will able to find my watch successfully.

✓ But in the end, I was able to find my watch successfully.

The phrase 'will able to' is incorrect; it should be 'was able to' to indicate past ability. Also, 'at last' is better expressed as 'in the end' here.

× I like to remember my school schedule on daily basis because of my school schedule change on daily basis and on daily basis I like to learn it for my good study.

✓ I like to remember my school schedule on a daily basis because my school schedule changes daily, and I like to learn it for my good studies.

The phrase 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to be 'on a daily basis'. Also, 'because of my school schedule change' should be 'because my school schedule changes'. 'Good study' is better expressed as 'good studies'.

× I like to write information about my important thing on paper because it is a very good way to remind important thing.

✓ I like to write information about important things on paper because it is a very good way to remember important things.

The phrase 'remind important thing' is incorrect; the verb should be 'remember'. Also, 'my important thing' is vague; 'important things' is more appropriate.

× For example, I write most expensive item on paper for reminding us.

✓ For example, I write the most expensive items on paper to remind myself.

'Most expensive item' needs the definite article 'the' and should be plural if referring generally. 'For reminding us' is incorrect; 'to remind myself' is more appropriate as the subject is singular and personal.