Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Votre réponse manque de fluidité et de structure claire. Essayez de formuler une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques sans répétition. Par exemple, évitez de répéter "I often forget" plusieurs fois et utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus naturelle.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my belongings. For instance, I sometimes misplace important items like my keys or documents, which can be frustrating.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est confuse et manque de clarté. Travaillez à structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, suivie d'explications précises. Évitez les erreurs grammaticales et les phrases incomplètes pour améliorer la compréhension.

Example: Yes, I once forgot an important event, which made me very upset. I missed a family gathering, and as a result, I lost the chance to reconnect with relatives.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est trop longue et répétitive. Essayez d'être plus concise et d'utiliser des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées. Par exemple, commencez par une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques liés à votre travail.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember where I place my belongings and the appointments I have. This is especially important for managing my work schedule effectively.

Suggestion: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des phrases plus naturelles et en évitant les répétitions. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus fluide.

Example: I usually remember important things by using my phone. For example, I take notes and set calendar alerts to remind me of important appointments.

× I often quite forget things, so I think that I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ I quite often forget things, so I think that I'm not good at memorizing things.

The adverb 'quite' is misplaced. It should be placed before 'often' to correctly modify the frequency adverb. The correct order is 'quite often' rather than 'often quite'.

× I kindly forget also an important, very important events.

✓ I also kindly forget important, very important events.

The word 'events' is plural, so the article 'an' which is singular is incorrect here. Also, the adverb 'kindly' is awkward in this context and should be placed after 'also' for better flow.

× Yes, actually one day I forgot special events and I forgot it absolutely about everything about it.

✓ Yes, actually one day I forgot a special event and I completely forgot everything about it.

The noun 'events' should be singular 'event' to match the context. The phrase 'forgot it absolutely about everything about it' is awkward and incorrect; 'completely forgot everything about it' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× And when times came and I find that the event is missing, I was frustrated and upset.

✓ And when the time came and I found that the event was missing, I was frustrated and upset.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Times came' should be 'the time came', and 'I find' should be past tense 'I found' to maintain consistency.

× It was a big event for me and it resulted lost of many things in my.

✓ It was a big event for me and it resulted in the loss of many things for me.

The phrase 'resulted lost of many things in my' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'resulted in the loss of many things for me' to convey the intended meaning.

× I often forget this things though so it is so important for me to remember it during my day to process my good job career.

✓ I often forget these things though, so it is very important for me to remember them during my day to progress in my career.

'This things' is incorrect; 'these things' is the correct plural demonstrative. Also, 'remember it' should be 'remember them' to agree with the plural 'things'. The phrase 'process my good job career' is awkward and corrected to 'progress in my career'.

× I usually take notes and making alerts in my phone to to help me remember my important appointments.

✓ I usually take notes and make alerts on my phone to help me remember my important appointments.

The verb forms should be parallel: 'take' and 'make' (base form), not 'take' and 'making'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. The repeated 'to' is a typo and removed.