Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'went to school' and 'some sites'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples with linking words like 'for instance' or 'such as'.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget to bring important items like my house keys or school books when I leave home.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words such as 'for example' to connect ideas. Also, try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, recently I needed to sign up for an important exam, and although my teacher reminded me to bring my identity card, I still forgot it on the day.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be specific about why these items are important and avoid unfinished sentences.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring essential items such as my phone and house keys. Without my phone, I might get lost or miss important messages, and without my keys, I can't enter my home.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and sentence structure issues. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words to explain your method of remembering, and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: Honestly, I'm quite disorganized, so I don't usually write things down because I might forget to bring a pen. Instead, I try to remember important things by repeating them to myself several times.

× So I'm not very good at memorizing things because like in my daily life I always forgot to bring some crucial things with me, like the keys to the house and the books when I was going to school, went to school or some sites.

✓ So I'm not very good at memorizing things because in my daily life I always forget to bring some crucial things with me, like the keys to the house and the books when I go to school or some sites.

The sentence mixes past tense 'forgot' with present context 'in my daily life'. Since the speaker talks about a habitual action, the present tense 'forget' is appropriate. Also, 'went to school' should be 'go to school' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I've done that before like recently I need to sign up for an very important examination.

✓ I've done that before. Recently, I needed to sign up for a very important examination.

The modal verb 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the past time reference 'recently'. Also, 'an very' is incorrect article usage; it should be 'a very' because 'very' starts with a consonant sound.

× The teacher remind me to bring the identity card before the sign up day, but when this day coming I just still forgot it.

✓ The teacher reminded me to bring my identity card before the sign-up day, but when the day came, I still forgot it.

'Remind' should be past tense 'reminded' to match past context. 'The identity card' is better as 'my identity card' for specificity. 'Sign up day' should be hyphenated as 'sign-up day'. 'When this day coming' is incorrect; it should be 'when the day came' to use past tense and correct structure.

× If I don't take my phone with me, I will get lost or make some important information from the phones and the second one is the house keys.

✓ If I don't take my phone with me, I will get lost or miss some important information from the phone, and the second one is the house keys.

'Make some important information' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'miss' to express failing to receive information. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' to match the singular subject. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding a comma before 'and'.

× Be honest, I'm a disordered people, so I won't write some important things down to remember in crucial things because sometimes I may forgot to bring pens with me so I just instead I repeated.

✓ To be honest, I'm a disorganized person, so I don't write important things down to remember because sometimes I may forget to bring pens with me, so instead, I just repeat things.

'Be honest' should be 'To be honest' as a common phrase. 'Disordered people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'disorganized person'. 'Won't write' is better as 'don't write' to express habitual action. 'May forgot' should be 'may forget' (modal verb + base verb). The sentence is run-on and unclear; it is corrected for clarity and proper conjunction use.