Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复，且表达较为冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更地道的表达方式。

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially words or poems in both Chinese and English. I find it quite challenging to remember details.

Suggestion: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Definitely. Once, when I was at boarding school, my mom went on a work trip, and I came home alone for the week. However, I forgot to bring my keys, so I couldn't get into the house.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且部分内容重复。建议简化表达，使用正确的时态和词汇，并且避免重复。

Example: The first thing I need to remember is feeding my cats, which has become a routine and easier for me. Besides that, I have to remind myself to keep studying my subjects, which can be quite challenging.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，且部分内容重复。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并且使句子更流畅。

Example: I usually write important things down in my calendar and set reminders. For example, before my IELTS test, I check everything I need to bring to make sure I don't forget anything.

× I am really bad at memory things especially like words or poems, Chinese or English.

✓ I am really bad at memorising things, especially words or poems, Chinese or English.

这里应该使用动词的-ing形式作宾语，'memory things'是不正确的表达，正确的是'memorising things'，表示记忆某些东西。

× I just I never had the talents in remembering anything.

✓ I just never had the talent for remembering anything.

这里'talents'应为单数'talent'，且表达习惯用法是'have the talent for doing something'，表示有做某事的天赋。

× there was once my mom went to a work trip and then I was at school for that week and then I come home on my own and the house is all to me.

✓ There was once when my mom went on a work trip and I was at school for that week, then I came home on my own and the house was all mine.

时态应保持一致，描述过去事件时应使用过去时，'come'应改为'came'，'is'应改为'was'。

× But then I forgot to bring my keys so I can't get in.

✓ But then I forgot to bring my keys so I couldn't get in.

描述过去发生的事情，情态动词应使用过去式，'can't'应改为'couldn't'。

× although it had it has already turned into a routine of mountain so it's something a lot more easier for me to do.

✓ although it has already turned into a routine of mine so it's something a lot easier for me to do.

'routine of mountain'表达错误，应为'routine of mine'表示我的习惯；'a lot more easier'中'more'和'er'重复，正确为'a lot easier'。

× I usually have to have it write it down on my calendar and set a reminder for me to remember that.

✓ I usually have to write it down in my calendar and set a reminder to remember that.

'have it write it down'结构不正确，应该直接用动词原形'write'；'on my calendar'应改为'in my calendar'更符合习惯用法。

× Especially important things like what I have to bring to IELTS, IELTS tests, and like my Idi, have to check it all before I set off.

✓ Especially important things like what I have to bring to the IELTS test, and like my ID, I have to check it all before I set off.

'Idi'应为'ID'，且句子缺少主语'I'，应补充完整；'IELTS tests'应为单数'test'，且前面加定冠词'the'。