Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Well, it really depends on what kind of thing. I mean, I'm quite good at memorizing texts or numbers such as telephone numbers, but it's quite a challenge for me to memorize people's face. For example, even though I met a person and talked with her for an hour, I may still forgotten her face the next day.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Yes, to be honest, I just found out that I've missed the registration date of my teaching certification test, which made my three month preparation came to waste because the next rejection date is for the next year.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
Well, there cry a lot of things I need to remember for the more Spacey one. As an English major, I have to remember at least 20 new words a day from my college.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
I record them in a note apps which also allows me to set reminders to ensure I won't forget them. Also, if I have to remember a specific time to do something, I will set a alarm clock because I won't look at my phone at any time.
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然且内容丰富,但存在语法错误(如“forgotten”应为“forget”),且部分表达不够简洁。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用,同时避免冗长句子,提升表达的准确性和流畅度。
Example: I am quite good at memorizing texts and numbers, such as telephone numbers. However, I find it challenging to remember people's faces. For example, even after talking with someone for an hour, I might forget their face the next day.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体,但语法错误较多,如“came to waste”应为“go to waste”,“rejection date”应为“registration date”。建议加强语法准确性,尤其是动词时态和词汇选择,同时注意句子结构的清晰。
Example: Yes, I recently missed the registration deadline for my teaching certification test. This was disappointing because my three months of preparation went to waste, and the next registration date is not until next year.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在明显的拼写和表达错误(如“cry”应为“are”,“Spacey”不明确),影响理解。建议加强词汇准确性和表达清晰度,避免拼写错误,并尽量提供更具体的细节。
Example: There are many things I need to remember daily. For example, as an English major, I have to learn at least 20 new words every day from my college lessons.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答表达基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如“a note apps”应为“a note app”,“a alarm clock”应为“an alarm clock”。建议注意冠词使用和单复数形式,同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: I record important things in a note app that allows me to set reminders, so I don't forget them. Also, if I need to remember a specific time, I set an alarm clock because I don't always check my phone.
× I mean, I'm quite good at memorizing texts or numbers such as telephone numbers, but it's quite a challenge for me to memorize people's face.
✓ I mean, I'm quite good at memorizing texts or numbers such as telephone numbers, but it's quite a challenge for me to memorize people's faces.
这里的face应该用复数faces,因为指的是多个人的脸。中文解释:当表示多个对象时,名词需要用复数形式。
× For example, even though I met a person and talked with her for an hour, I may still forgotten her face the next day.
✓ For example, even though I met a person and talked with her for an hour, I may still forget her face the next day.
这里的forgotten是过去分词,句中应使用动词原形forget,因为前面有情态动词may。中文解释:情态动词后面应接动词原形,而不是过去分词。
× Yes, to be honest, I just found out that I've missed the registration date of my teaching certification test, which made my three month preparation came to waste because the next rejection date is for the next year.
✓ Yes, to be honest, I just found out that I've missed the registration date of my teaching certification test, which made my three months' preparation come to waste because the next registration date is next year.
1. three month应为复数形式three months,并且作所有格时加撇号。2. came应为动词原形come,因为made后接动词原形。3. rejection date应为registration date。4. for the next year改为next year更自然。中文解释:复数名词作所有格时需加撇号;使役动词made后接动词原形;单词拼写错误;时间表达更地道。
× Well, there cry a lot of things I need to remember for the more Spacey one.
✓ Well, there are a lot of things I need to remember, especially the more specific ones.
1. there cry应为there are,表示存在。2. things是复数,后面应用复数指代ones。3. Spacey应为specific,意思更符合语境。中文解释:存在句中动词应为are;复数名词后指代词也应为复数;单词拼写错误。
× As an English major, I have to remember at least 20 new words a day from my college.
✓ As an English major, I have to remember at least 20 new words a day at my college.
这里应使用介词at表示在某个地点学习,而不是from。中文解释:表示地点时,介词应选用at而非from。
× I record them in a note apps which also allows me to set reminders to ensure I won't forget them.
✓ I record them in a note app which also allows me to set reminders to ensure I won't forget them.
note apps是复数形式,但前面用的是不定冠词a,应该用单数app。中文解释:冠词a后应接单数名词。
× Also, if I have to remember a specific time to do something, I will set a alarm clock because I won't look at my phone at any time.
✓ Also, if I have to remember a specific time to do something, I will set an alarm clock because I won't look at my phone at any time.
a alarm clock前应使用an,因为alarm以元音音素开头。中文解释:以元音音素开头的单词前用an而非a。