Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は直接的であるものの、繰り返しや冗長な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、重複を避け、具体的な例や理由を加えると良いでしょう。

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I have always been able to remember important facts for my exams, which helped me achieve good grades throughout my school years.

Suggestion: 内容は明確ですが、文法の誤りや表現の不自然さがあります。より自然な英語表現を使い、理由や結果を詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

Example: Yes, I once forgot the date of my university entrance exam, which meant I missed the opportunity to attend that university. As a result, I enrolled in a different university instead.

Suggestion: 回答が少し不明瞭で文法的にも改善が必要です。具体的な内容を明確にし、自然な表現で説明することを心がけてください。

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember the days I have to visit hospitals for my health issues, such as headaches and backaches, to ensure I don't miss any appointments.

Suggestion: 回答は明確で内容も理解しやすいですが、より自然な表現と接続詞を使って流れを良くするとさらに良くなります。

Example: I usually make a list to help me remember important tasks. Without this list, I tend to forget many things, so it's essential for me to stay organized.

× Since my childhood, I'm good at it.

✓ Since my childhood, I have been good at it.

The sentence refers to a state starting in the past and continuing to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have been' is appropriate instead of the simple present 'am'.

× So I did not enter that university, instead I enter another university.

✓ So I did not enter that university; instead, I entered another university.

The sentence describes past events, so both verbs should be in the past tense. 'Enter' should be changed to 'entered' to maintain tense consistency.

× It is a day to go to hospitals.

✓ It is a day to go to the hospital.

When referring to medical treatment, 'go to the hospital' is the correct expression. Also, 'a day' is vague; contextually, 'It is a day to go to the hospital' is clearer.

× I have to go to a lot of hospitals because my disease, for example, headache and backache.

✓ I have to go to the hospital a lot because of my illnesses, for example, headaches and backaches.

The phrase 'go to a lot of hospitals' is unusual; typically, one goes to 'the hospital' multiple times. Also, 'because my disease' is incomplete; 'because of my illnesses' is correct. Headache and backache should be plural as they are countable symptoms.

× I always make a list which makes me remember the important things.

✓ I always make a list that helps me remember important things.

'Which' is less appropriate here; 'that' is better for defining clauses. Also, 'makes me remember' is awkward; 'helps me remember' is more natural.

× If I don't have that list, I will forget many things to do, so making a list is essential.

✓ If I don't have that list, I will forget many things I have to do, so making a list is essential.

The phrase 'many things to do' is incomplete; adding 'I have to do' clarifies the meaning.