Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially numbers and patterns. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers and important dates from my childhood.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho sự kiện đã xảy ra và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'procrastination' trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

Example: Yes, I once forgot an important school meeting two years ago because I procrastinated and didn't write it down in my planner.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu quá dài. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác.

Example: As a student, I need to remember my homework, assignments from teachers, household chores, and the time to pick up my brother from school.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn bị ngắt quãng và thiếu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy trả lời đầy đủ ý, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp.

Example: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my notebook or phone. This method helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

× Actually, I'm a person really keen on maths and numbers, so I believe that I'm good at memorizing things like how it will be organized and also I can remember a lot of things in the past and when I was a kid.

✓ Actually, I'm a person really keen on maths and numbers, so I believe that I'm good at memorizing things like how they are organized and also I can remember a lot of things from the past and when I was a kid.

The phrase 'how it will be organized' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' and the tense should match the context. Using 'how they are organized' is correct. Also, 'in the past' should be 'from the past' to indicate recalling past events.

× Yes, definitely I have ever forgotten something important like the meeting in my school and also my meeting with my friends at the coffee shop in two years ago because I'm a quite have procrastination so I forgot it in.

✓ Yes, definitely I have forgotten something important like a meeting at my school and also my meeting with my friends at a coffee shop two years ago because I quite often procrastinate, so I forgot it.

The phrase 'have ever forgotten' is incorrect; 'have forgotten' is sufficient. 'In two years ago' is wrong; 'two years ago' is correct. 'I'm a quite have procrastination' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I quite often procrastinate'. The sentence ending 'so I forgot it in' is incomplete and corrected to 'so I forgot it'.

× Yes, definitely I have ever forgotten something important like the meeting in my school and also my meeting with my friends at the coffee shop in two years ago because I'm a quite have procrastination so I forgot it in.

✓ Yes, definitely I have forgotten something important like a meeting at my school and also my meeting with my friends at a coffee shop two years ago because I quite often procrastinate, so I forgot it.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'my school' and 'two years ago'. The correct prepositions are 'at my school' and no preposition before 'two years ago'. Also, 'at the coffee shop' is better as 'at a coffee shop' unless a specific one is known.

× As a student I have lots of things to remember in my daily life like my homework and also the assignment that my teacher gave to me and also things like what to do the house works at home and also what time to pick my brother to school. So I have lots of things to remember.

✓ As a student, I have lots of things to remember in my daily life like my homework and also the assignments that my teacher gave me and also things like what housework to do at home and also what time to pick my brother up from school. So I have lots of things to remember.

'The assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match 'lots of things'. 'House works' is incorrect; 'housework' is uncountable and singular. 'Pick my brother to school' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pick my brother up from school'.

× As a student I have lots of things to remember in my daily life like my homework and also the assignment that my teacher gave to me and also things like what to do the house works at home and also what time to pick my brother to school. So I have lots of things to remember.

✓ As a student, I have lots of things to remember in my daily life like my homework and also the assignments that my teacher gave me and also things like what housework to do at home and also what time to pick my brother up from school. So I have lots of things to remember.

The preposition 'to' in 'gave to me' is unnecessary; 'gave me' is correct. Also, 'pick my brother to school' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'pick my brother up from school'.

× Actually, I usually remember important things by noting some crucial information in my notebook or on my phone because it. I think it is so effective and convenient for me to keep track it and also I can manage my time effectively and I can stay organized when I.

✓ Actually, I usually remember important things by noting some crucial information in my notebook or on my phone because I think it is so effective and convenient for me to keep track of it. Also, I can manage my time effectively and stay organized when I do this.

The sentence is incomplete and fragmented. 'Because it.' is incomplete and should be connected to the next sentence. 'Keep track it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep track of it'. The last part 'when I.' is incomplete and should be completed as 'when I do this' or similar.