Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating words like 'recently'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by a specific example using linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things. However, sometimes I do forget, such as recently when I forgot to put my key in my bag before leaving home, which caused me some trouble.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'Umm' and by using correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I usually have a sharp memory, so I rarely forget important things. However, once I forgot to pick up my expensive sunglasses from a hotel, which was quite unfortunate.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Avoid redundancy and ensure correct sentence structure.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many tasks, such as dropping my son at school by 10:00 am and picking him up later. I make sure to prepare in advance to manage these responsibilities on time.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words. Also, avoid contradictory statements and be specific.

Example: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my diary or phone notes. For example, I highlight birthdays to ensure I don't forget them.

× recently I forget to put the key in my bag and when I remember, I was out of my home and it was very, very difficult for me then.

✓ recently I forgot to put the key in my bag and when I remembered, I was out of my home and it was very, very difficult for me then.

The verbs 'forget' and 'remember' should be in the past tense 'forgot' and 'remembered' to correctly indicate actions that happened in the past. Using present tense here is incorrect because the event is completed.

× there I forget to pick up my sunglasses, which is very expensive and important to me.

✓ there I forgot to pick up my sunglasses, which is very expensive and important to me.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to correctly describe a past event. Using present tense 'forget' is incorrect in this context.

× I have to drop my son at school at proper shop 10:00.

✓ I have to drop my son at school at proper time 10:00.

The word 'shop' is incorrect here; the correct preposition and word should be 'time' to indicate the correct meaning. 'Proper shop' is not meaningful in this context.

× So I remember to be get ready before 10 and to pick up him pick up him from the school and from.

✓ So I remember to get ready before 10 and to pick him up from the school.

The phrase 'to be get ready' is incorrect; it should be 'to get ready'. Also, 'pick up him' is incorrect; the correct pronoun order is 'pick him up'. The sentence is also incomplete and redundant at the end.

× Sometimes I forget to write it down. So I think the remembering of birthdays are very important, so I highlight it and remember on time, so forget.

✓ Sometimes I forget to write it down. So I think remembering birthdays is very important, so I highlight them and remember on time.

The phrase 'the remembering of birthdays are' is incorrect; it should be 'remembering birthdays is' because 'remembering' is a singular gerund. Also, 'highlight it' should be 'highlight them' to agree with the plural 'birthdays'. The phrase 'so forget' at the end is incomplete and unclear, so it is removed.