Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, use 'faces' instead of 'people's face' and avoid repeating 'things'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I am good at memorizing things like people's faces and what they say. However, I find it difficult to memorize written material, such as course content from my books, because it takes me a lot of time.

Suggestion: Try to improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repeating words like 'where'. Use linking words to explain cause and effect clearly. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'Silly, right?' in formal speaking.

Example: Yes, when I am very stressed, I tend to forget things. For example, my mind goes blank, and I cannot remember small details, such as where I last placed my phone.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition such as 'like like' and unclear phrases like 'my P PowerPoint'. Be specific and organize your answer with linking words to make it coherent.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. For instance, in my studies, I have to memorize course content for presentations, including the information on my PowerPoint slides. Additionally, I try to remember important details about my friends.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity by correcting phrases like 'phone notebook' to 'phone's note app'. Avoid unclear sentences like 'It will it'. Use linking words to explain your method clearly.

Example: I remember important things by writing them down in the note application on my phone. Since I have a short-term memory, this method helps me avoid forgetting important information in my daily activities.

× Yes, I am good at memorizing things such as people's face, the way the thing they have said, but I'm not so good at memorizing the things I have read.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things such as people's faces, the way they say things, but I'm not so good at memorizing the things I have read.

The word 'face' should be plural 'faces' to match 'people's' which is plural (Grammar problem type ID: 1). Also, 'the way the thing they have said' is incorrect; it should be 'the way they say things' to correctly express habitual action and proper noun usage (Grammar problem type ID: 6).

× It take a lot of time for me to memorize the course from my book.

✓ It takes a lot of time for me to memorize the course from my book.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'takes' to agree in number (Grammar problem type ID: 27).

× A lot of time when I'm too much stressed I tend to forget things.

✓ A lot of times when I'm too stressed, I tend to forget things.

The phrase 'A lot of time' should be 'A lot of times' to indicate frequency. Also, 'too much stressed' is incorrect; 'too stressed' is the correct form (Grammar problem type ID: 13).

× My mind goes completely shut and I can't even remember small details such as the last time I kept where the where I kept my phone.

✓ My mind goes completely blank and I can't even remember small details such as the last time I remember where I kept my phone.

'Goes completely shut' is incorrect; 'goes completely blank' is the correct expression. Also, the phrase 'the last time I kept where the where I kept my phone' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'the last time I remember where I kept my phone' (Grammar problem type ID: 26).

× Like in my daily life, I do have to remember quite a lot of things. Like like in my studies, I have to memorize my course content for presentation. I have to memorize the content I have written in my P PowerPoint and of course my friend.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember quite a lot of things. For example, in my studies, I have to memorize my course content for presentations. I have to memorize the content I have written in my PowerPoint and, of course, remember my friends.

Repeated 'Like like' is redundant and should be removed. 'For presentation' should be plural 'for presentations'. 'P PowerPoint' seems to be a typo and should be 'PowerPoint'. 'And of course my friend' is incomplete; it should be 'and, of course, remember my friends' to make sense (Grammar problem type ID: 26).

× Well, I try to remember important things by noting them down in my phone notebook.

✓ Well, I try to remember important things by noting them down in my phone's notebook.

The phrase 'in my phone notebook' is incorrect; it should be 'in my phone's notebook' to show possession (Grammar problem type ID: 11).

× As I have short term memory I tend to forget things quickly.

✓ As I have a short-term memory, I tend to forget things quickly.

'Short term memory' needs an article 'a' and a hyphen to form the compound adjective 'short-term memory' (Grammar problem type ID: 22).

× So I use my phone's not application to write down the information which is very important.

✓ So I use my phone's note application to write down the information which is very important.

'Not application' is a typo; it should be 'note application' (Grammar problem type ID: 26).

× It will it. This helps for me in my day-to-day activities.

✓ This helps me in my day-to-day activities.

'It will it' is an incomplete and incorrect sentence and should be removed. 'Helps for me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'helps me' (Grammar problem type ID: 26).