Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and repetitions, which affects the natural flow. Try to give a direct response with clear structure and avoid filler words. Also, use correct tenses and avoid confusing phrases like 'mid autumn school'.

Example: I am not very good at memorising things nowadays, but I used to have a better memory when I was in middle school because I practiced it regularly.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Although my memory is not as good as before, I rarely forget important things because I always write them down on paper or use my smartphone reminders.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetitions and hesitations. Make sure to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Provide specific examples and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as my daily routines and any unexpected assignments. For example, this morning I received an emergency task that I had to complete quickly.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use more varied vocabulary. Also, ensure your sentences are concise and well-structured.

Example: I usually remember important things by writing them down on my smartphone or on paper. For instance, I am currently working on a dissertation, so I note all the deadlines on my phone to make sure I don't miss any.

× I'm not good at memorizing things umm they nowadays, but I'm quite smart in this area when I was uh, mid autumn, mid autumn school, mid middle school students because my memory is always used and sharpened every day.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things nowadays, but I was quite smart in this area when I was in middle school because my memory was always used and sharpened every day.

The original sentence misuses 'they' and has awkward phrasing. 'They nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' should stand alone. Also, 'mid autumn school, mid middle school students' is unclear and redundant. The correction clarifies the time frame and subject. 'Was' is used to match past tense when referring to middle school. 'My memory is always used' is changed to 'was always used' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Although my memory isn't that good than before, but as before but I seldom forget anything important because I always write the crucial things down either on the paper or with or use smartphones to remind me so that I won't forget anything.

✓ Although my memory isn't as good as before, I seldom forget anything important because I always write crucial things down either on paper or use smartphones to remind me so that I won't forget anything.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'although' and 'but' together, which is redundant. Also, 'isn't that good than before' is incorrect; the correct comparative structure is 'isn't as good as before'. The phrase 'either on the paper or with or use smartphones' is awkward; it is corrected to 'either on paper or use smartphones'. Removing redundant conjunctions and correcting comparative structure improves clarity.

× I have quite a lot quite a lot of things to remember, For example my daily routines and and some unexpected assignment. So I need to. For example, I just receive an emergency task this morning, so I need to.

✓ I have quite a lot of things to remember, for example, my daily routines and some unexpected assignments. For instance, I just received an emergency task this morning, so I need to handle it.

The original sentence repeats 'quite a lot' and has incomplete sentences like 'So I need to.' which lack a verb or object. 'And and' is a typo. 'Assignment' should be plural to match 'some'. 'I just receive' should be past tense 'I just received' to match 'this morning'. The correction fixes repetition, completes sentences, corrects tense, and pluralizes nouns appropriately.

× Well, as I just said, I often write my important things down either on reminders, on my smart phones or on papers. For example, I have a dissertation to complete recently recently, so I write every single time point in on my smartphones so that I won't miss any one of them.

✓ Well, as I just said, I often write my important things down either on reminders, on my smartphones or on paper. For example, I have a dissertation to complete recently, so I write every single time point on my smartphone so that I won't miss any of them.

'Smart phones' should be one word 'smartphones'. 'On papers' is better as 'on paper' for general reference. 'Recently recently' is repeated and corrected to a single 'recently'. 'Write every single time point in on my smartphones' is awkward; corrected to 'write every single time point on my smartphone'. 'Any one of them' is simplified to 'any of them' for natural phrasing.