MemoryPart 1 Report

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Conversation

Part 1

Examiner

Are you good at memorising things?

Candidate

Yes for sure. As a Chinese student when I was little, our school teachers often requires me reciting a lot of poet, poetry and traditional artist articles.

Examiner

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Candidate

Yes, I remember I have a very bad experience. I forget my mom's birthday party and I don't didn't prepare the birthday.

Examiner

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Candidate

Absolutely, I have many thing to remember in my daily basis to being begin with, I need to remember my schedules and it helps me to make a plan to.

Examiner

How do you remember important things?

Candidate

In order to remember important things, I can make a list or set a reminder to ensures the events can on time.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.0Fluency & Coherence: 5.5Pronunciation: 5.0Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“requires me reciting”应为“required me to recite”,且“poet, poetry and traditional artist articles”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和词汇,使回答更自然流畅。

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things. When I was a child, my teachers often required me to recite poems and traditional Chinese articles, which helped improve my memory skills.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: 回答中时态混乱且表达不清晰,如“don't didn't prepare the birthday”语法错误且含义不明确。建议使用正确的时态,清楚表达忘记准备生日派对的事实,并适当扩展细节。

Example: Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday party and didn't prepare any gifts or decorations, which made me feel very sorry.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Score: 55.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,如“many thing”应为“many things”,“to being begin with”表达不自然且句子未完成。建议简洁明了地说明需要记住的事项,并使用连贯的句子。

Example: I need to remember many things in my daily life. To begin with, I always keep track of my schedule because it helps me plan my day effectively.

How do you remember important things?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误如“ensures the events can on time”表达不准确。建议使用正确的语法和更自然的表达方式,同时可以补充更多细节说明方法的效果。

Example: To remember important things, I usually make a list or set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't miss any events on time.

Grammar

Subject-verb agreement errors

× As a Chinese student when I was little, our school teachers often requires me reciting a lot of poet, poetry and traditional artist articles.

As a Chinese student when I was little, our school teachers often required me to recite a lot of poems, poetry, and traditional artistic articles.

主谓不一致,teachers是复数,谓语动词应为复数形式required。动词后面接动词不定式to recite而非动名词reciting。poet应为复数形式poems,traditional artist articles应为traditional artistic articles。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I remember I have a very bad experience.

Yes, I remember I had a very bad experience.

描述过去的经历时,动词时态应为过去时,have应改为had。

Past tense issue

× I forget my mom's birthday party and I don't didn't prepare the birthday.

I forgot my mom's birthday party and I didn't prepare for the birthday.

描述过去事件时,forget应为过去式forgot。句中don't didn't混用,应只用didn't。prepare后应加介词for。

Singular and plural issue

× Absolutely, I have many thing to remember in my daily basis to being begin with, I need to remember my schedules and it helps me to make a plan to.

Absolutely, I have many things to remember in my daily life. To begin with, I need to remember my schedule and it helps me to make a plan.

thing应为复数things。daily basis用法不当,改为daily life。句子结构混乱,分为两句更清晰。schedules改为schedule以匹配单数动词helps。

Modal verb usage

× In order to remember important things, I can make a list or set a reminder to ensures the events can on time.

In order to remember important things, I can make a list or set a reminder to ensure the events happen on time.

动词不定式后应使用原形动词ensure。can后缺少动词,补充happen。

Vocabulary

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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