Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时句子较长且有些重复，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时使用更地道的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember people's faces and names, as well as important deadlines. This ability has even helped me improve my English studies.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复和口语填充词，表达不够连贯。建议减少重复，使用连接词使叙述更流畅，并注意语法准确。

Example: Yes, last summer during a family trip to a nature park, I accidentally left my mobile phone in the restroom. Unfortunately, when I returned, it was gone. It was a special gift from my mother, so I was very upset.

Suggestion: 回答内容较丰富，但部分表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和搭配的准确性。

Example: I need to remember important social and family commitments. For instance, I always try to keep in touch with my loved ones and remember their birthdays and anniversaries to maintain strong relationships. Also, I keep track of when to take my medications and vitamins to stay healthy.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I usually rely on technology like my mobile phone to remember important things. I set alarms and use apps such as calendars and to-do lists to keep track of important dates and deadlines.

× Yes, I would consider myself good at remembering things such as I can remember other people's faces and names without any efforts and also the deadlines can be easily memorized by myself and maybe sometimes it can be reflect on my study marks, you know such as the English language learning can be seen that I have a good memory.

✓ Yes, I would consider myself good at remembering things such as I can remember other people's faces and names without any effort and also the deadlines can be easily memorized by myself and maybe sometimes it can be reflected in my study marks, you know, such as the English language learning can show that I have a good memory.

这里“reflect”应该用动名词形式“reflected”，因为前面用了情态动词“can”，后面接动词时应使用动词原形或过去分词，这里是被动含义，故用过去分词“reflected”。另外，“efforts”应为不可数名词“effort”。

× Yes, I would consider myself good at remembering things such as I can remember other people's faces and names without any efforts and also the deadlines can be easily memorized by myself and maybe sometimes it can be reflect on my study marks, you know such as the English language learning can be seen that I have a good memory.

✓ Yes, I would consider myself good at remembering things such as I can remember other people's faces and names without any effort and also the deadlines can be easily memorized by myself and maybe sometimes it can be reflected in my study marks, you know, such as the English language learning can show that I have a good memory.

介词“reflect on”在这里不合适，正确用法是“reflected in”，表示“反映在……上”。

× Yeah, certainly. If I'm not mistaken, I remember that just just last summer vacation, my family and I went to a nature park and just there I forgot my important mobile phone that was given by my mother as my birthday gifts.

✓ Yeah, certainly. If I'm not mistaken, I remember that just last summer vacation, my family and I went to a nature park and there I forgot my important mobile phone that was given by my mother as my birthday gift.

“just just”重复，应去掉一个“just”。“birthday gifts”应为单数“birthday gift”，因为指的是一件礼物。

× Yeah, certainly. If I'm not mistaken, I remember that just just last summer vacation, my family and I went to a nature park and just there I forgot my important mobile phone that was given by my mother as my birthday gifts.

✓ Yeah, certainly. If I'm not mistaken, I remember that just last summer vacation, my family and I went to a nature park and there I forgot my important mobile phone that was given by my mother as my birthday gift.

“birthday gifts”应为单数“birthday gift”，因为指的是一件礼物。

× Whatever. I just, I just left it in the toilet rooms and you know, just when I went to it again to find my mobile phones, wow, it's stolen.

✓ Whatever. I just, I just left it in the toilet and you know, just when I went back to find my mobile phone, wow, it was stolen.

“toilet rooms”应为“toilet”，更自然。动词“went to it again”表达不准确，应为“went back”。“mobile phones”应为单数“mobile phone”，因为指一部手机。时态“it's stolen”应为过去时“it was stolen”。

× Whatever. I just, I just left it in the toilet rooms and you know, just when I went to it again to find my mobile phones, wow, it's stolen.

✓ Whatever. I just, I just left it in the toilet and you know, just when I went back to find my mobile phone, wow, it was stolen.

“mobile phones”应为单数“mobile phone”，因为指一部手机。

× Whatever. I just, I just left it in the toilet rooms and you know, just when I went to it again to find my mobile phones, wow, it's stolen.

✓ Whatever. I just, I just left it in the toilet and you know, just when I went back to find my mobile phone, wow, it was stolen.

“it's stolen”时态错误，应为过去时“it was stolen”，因为事件发生在过去。

× I need to remember my social and family issues and commitments clearly. For example, for the foresight, I need to remember to check in with my loved ones and remember their anniversaries and birthdays so that I could maintain them strong relationships with them.

✓ I need to remember my social and family issues and commitments clearly. For example, for the future, I need to remember to check in with my loved ones and remember their anniversaries and birthdays so that I could maintain strong relationships with them.

“foresight”用词不当，应改为“future”表示“未来”。“maintain them strong relationships”中“them”多余，应去掉。

× I need to remember my social and family issues and commitments clearly. For example, for the foresight, I need to remember to check in with my loved ones and remember their anniversaries and birthdays so that I could maintain them strong relationships with them.

✓ I need to remember my social and family issues and commitments clearly. For example, for the future, I need to remember to check in with my loved ones and remember their anniversaries and birthdays so that I could maintain strong relationships with them.

“maintain them strong relationships”中“them”用法错误，应该直接说“maintain strong relationships”。

× And for the other side, I need to keep track of my time, just like when I should take on my medications and vitamins to make myself healthy.

✓ And on the other hand, I need to keep track of my time, just like when I should take my medications and vitamins to keep myself healthy.

“for the other side”表达不自然，应改为“on the other hand”。“take on my medications”中“on”多余，应去掉。

× Most of my time I will use the smart technologies such as my mobile phone. Yeah, it is indispensable for me to remember them important dates and the deadlines such as Sometimes I would setting the alarms and using the apps like the like the calendars and to do lists to make me track of my important tasks and.

✓ Most of the time I use smart technologies such as my mobile phone. Yeah, it is indispensable for me to remember important dates and deadlines. Sometimes I set alarms and use apps like calendars and to-do lists to help me keep track of my important tasks.

“Most of my time”应为“Most of the time”。“them important dates”中“them”多余，应去掉。动词“would setting”错误，应为“would set”或直接“set”。“make me track”表达不当，应为“help me keep track”。