Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单且正确的句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持。

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget important deadlines for my essays at school, and sometimes I even forget where I parked my car.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Example: Yes, last semester I forgot the deadline for an important essay because I had too many assignments. Fortunately, I emailed my professor, and he kindly gave me an extension.

Suggestion: 回答内容重复且表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明需要记住的事情，并用连接词组织句子。

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my homework and assignments because I am a university student. Especially during the final week, I have many assignments and presentations to prepare for.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，并注意句子连贯。

Example: I usually use technology to remember important things. For example, I set alarms or use apps on my phone to remind me of important assignments and deadlines.

× No I really bad to memorize anything no matter in my school I need to have some important essays.

✓ No, I am really bad at memorizing anything. For example, at school I need to have some important essays.

动词后面接动名词形式（memorizing）表示记忆的动作。原句中使用了不正确的动词形式，应该用动名词。

× I always forgot the deadline and also I forgot something like where my car parking and where are my kids.

✓ I always forget the deadline and also forget things like where I parked my car and where my kids are.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时（forget），而不是过去时（forgot）。另外，表达停车位置时应使用过去式（parked）。

× Yes, in the last semester I had a very important essay and it affected my final grade, but I forgot the deadline because I have too much assignment to and finally I write a e-mail to my professor and he forgive me and give me another date.

✓ Yes, last semester I had a very important essay and it affected my final grade, but I forgot the deadline because I had too many assignments. Finally, I wrote an e-mail to my professor and he forgave me and gave me another date.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式（had, forgot, wrote, forgave, gave）。另外，assignment应为复数形式assignments。

× because I have too much assignment to and finally I write a e-mail to my professor

✓ because I had too many assignments and finally I wrote an e-mail to my professor

assignment是可数名词，表示多个时应使用复数形式assignments，且搭配的量词应为many而非much。

× I always forgot the deadline and also I forgot something like where my car parking and where are my kids.

✓ I always forget the deadline and also forget things like where I parked my car and where my kids are.

表达停车位置时应使用动词短语parked my car，而不是名词短语my car parking。

× I think in my daily life, the most thing I need to remember is my homework assets because I'm a university student.

✓ I think in my daily life, the most important thing I need to remember is my homework assignments because I'm a university student.

assets（资产）用法错误，应使用assignments（作业）。

× In the final week, we have too many assignments to do no matter we need to preparing the final exams where we have a lot of presentations.

✓ In the final week, we have too many assignments to do, and we also need to prepare for the final exams where we have a lot of presentations.

句子中缺少连词and，且动词prepare应为不定式形式prepare。

× we need to preparing the final exams

✓ we need to prepare for the final exams

动词need后接不定式to prepare，而不是动名词preparing。

× Sometimes I will have a set. I will set an alarm or use an app in my cell phone to notice me some important assignments and the deadline of some important things.

✓ Sometimes I will set an alarm or use an app on my cell phone to remind me of some important assignments and their deadlines.

动词remind后应接介词of，表示提醒某事。手机上应使用介词on而非in。notice用法不当，应改为remind。