Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy by not repeating 'really good' twice. Also, provide a more complete example with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For instance, I can easily remember the extension numbers of many of my colleagues at work, which helps me communicate efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use proper expressions like 'rarely' instead of 'really seldom' and 'memorize' instead of 'memory things'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I rarely forget important things because I have a good memory, and if I am unsure, I write them down to help me remember.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, organize your points clearly with linking words and specific details.

Example: There are a couple of important things I need to remember daily. First, I have to keep track of tasks such as due dates and remind customers about their payments. Second, I need to prepare credit proposals and ensure I meet the deadlines.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Avoid vague phrases like 'much more higher priority' and 'any like paper or candidate'. Instead, clearly explain your method using proper vocabulary and sentence structure.

Example: As I mentioned earlier, I write down the most important tasks on paper or in a notebook to help me remember them.

× I know that many people's extension number in my office.

✓ I know many people's extension numbers in my office.

The noun 'number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple people's extension numbers, not just one.

× Well, really seldom, since I'm really quite good at memory things or I will write it down to help me to memorize the important things.

✓ Well, very seldom, since I'm really quite good at memorizing things or I write them down to help me remember important things.

The adverb 'really seldom' is awkward; 'very seldom' is more natural. 'Memory things' is incorrect; the verb 'memorizing' should be used. Also, 'help me to memorize' is better as 'help me remember'. The sentence is adjusted for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, there's a couple of things I would need to remember.

✓ Well, there are a couple of things I need to remember.

The phrase 'there's' is singular but 'a couple of things' is plural, so 'there are' should be used for subject-verb agreement.

× The first was the task like such as the due date, what customer I have to contact them to remind them don't forget the payments.

✓ The first is tasks such as the due date and which customers I have to contact to remind them not to forget the payments.

The tense should be present 'is' to match the current tasks. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar, including removing unnecessary pronouns and fixing the phrase 'don't forget' to 'not to forget'.

× what customer I have to contact them to remind them don't forget the payments.

✓ which customers I have to contact to remind them not to forget the payments.

The pronoun 'them' is redundant after 'contact' and should be removed. Also, 'what customer' should be 'which customers' for correct reference.

× And secondly will be like the credit proposal, I have to prepare, I have to meet the deadline before.

✓ Secondly, there is the credit proposal I have to prepare, and I have to meet the deadline.

The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Will be like' is awkward and replaced with 'there is'. 'Before' is unnecessary and removed.

× Well, as I said, I will write down the much more higher priority on any like paper or candidate.

✓ Well, as I said, I will write down the higher priority tasks on paper or a candidate list.

The phrase 'much more higher' is redundant; 'higher' alone suffices. 'On any like paper or candidate' is unclear; corrected to 'on paper or a candidate list' for clarity. Pronouns and articles are adjusted accordingly.