Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn.

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget what my mom tells me because I don't pay enough attention.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những lỗi ngữ pháp như sai thì hoặc thiếu từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten my homework once because I wasn't paying full attention when the teacher explained it.

Suggestion: Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi thay vì hỏi lại giám khảo. Hãy nghĩ về những việc quan trọng bạn cần nhớ hàng ngày và trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments, deadlines for work, and to take my medicine on time.

Suggestion: Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng cách bạn ghi nhớ việc quan trọng với ví dụ cụ thể.

Example: I usually make a to-do list to remember important tasks. After completing each task, I check it off the list to keep track.

× Sometimes someone say something and I forgot I forgot, for example when my mom says that. See the idea?

✓ Sometimes someone says something and I forget, for example when my mom says that. See the idea?

The verb 'say' should be in third person singular form 'says' to agree with the singular subject 'someone'. Also, 'forgot' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'forget' in present tense is more appropriate.

× I have forgotten my my my homework because I don't. I didn't pay full attention when listening my teacher say about sex about my homework. So I forgot and I didn't remember.

✓ I have forgotten my homework because I didn't pay full attention when listening to my teacher talk about my homework. So I forgot and didn't remember.

The phrase 'listening my teacher say' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to my teacher talk'. Also, 'say about sex about my homework' is unclear and likely a misstatement; 'talk about my homework' is clearer. The past tense 'didn't pay' and 'forgot' are correct here.

× I didn't pay full attention when listening my teacher say about sex about my homework.

✓ I didn't pay full attention when listening to my teacher talk about my homework.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'say about sex about my homework' is incorrect; 'talk about my homework' is the correct phrase.

× I have forgotten my my my homework because I don't.

✓ I have forgotten my homework because I didn't.

The repetition 'my my my' is an error. Also, 'I don't' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'I didn't' to match the past tense context.

× Can you recommend for me some ideas?

✓ Can you recommend some ideas to me?

The verb 'recommend' is not followed by 'for'; the correct structure is 'recommend something to someone'.

× I try to remember my important things, uh, uh, I will, uh, do a, a list of, uh, of, To Do List that, uh, have a lot of things I need to do.

✓ I try to remember important things. I will make a To Do List that has a lot of things I need to do.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. It should be split into clear sentences with correct verb forms and article usage.

× And I when I finish some finish, uh, once I will check.

✓ And when I finish something, I will check it off.

The phrase 'when I finish some finish' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'when I finish something'. Also, 'I will check' needs an object, so 'check it off' is appropriate.