Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to make your response more natural by avoiding redundancy and structuring your answer clearly with linking words. Also, use more precise vocabulary to describe what you remember.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I always remember my daily schedule, important tasks at home, and study-related activities. This helps me stay organised and manage my time effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and is repetitive. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason or example. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I have rarely forgotten anything important because I make a conscious effort to remember crucial tasks. For example, I always double-check my appointments to ensure I don't miss them.

Suggestion: Your answer is too general and repetitive. Try to be more specific about what you need to remember and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammatical mistakes for clarity.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments, deadlines, and household chores. Since my routine is hectic, I focus carefully to ensure I complete all my tasks on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary.

Example: I am good at memorising, but to ensure I don't forget important tasks, I set alarms on my phone. When the alarm rings, it reminds me to complete the task at the right time.

× Still, I don't forgotten something important because I remember because I remember each and because I remember each and everything of my life.

✓ Still, I haven't forgotten something important because I remember each and everything of my life.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'don't forgotten' which is grammatically wrong. The correct form is the present perfect tense 'haven't forgotten' to indicate an action that has relevance to the present. Use 'have/has' + past participle for present perfect tense.

× So that I can't forget that things.

✓ So that I can't forget those things.

The phrase 'that things' is incorrect because 'that' is singular demonstrative adjective and 'things' is plural noun. The correct plural demonstrative adjective is 'those' to match the plural noun 'things'.

× And there are many of the works which I do in my daily routine and that are my habits.

✓ And there are many works which I do in my daily routine and that are my habits.

The phrase 'many of the works' is incorrect here. 'Many works' is correct without 'of the' because 'works' is a plural noun and 'many' directly modifies it. 'Many of the' is used when referring to a specific set already mentioned, which is not the case here.

× So I in this type of I remember my things.

✓ So in this way, I remember my things.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'In this type of' is incorrect usage. The correct phrase is 'in this way' to express the method of remembering. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.