Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things. I can memorize many things which happened when I was young.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Of course yes. Umm for example I forgot my exams online last term so I got 0 point in my 2 exams. I think it's terrible.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
I need to remember what I should study, what people I should met, if people, if somebody invites me to join some party or the meeting, I will make a list or a schedule before tomorrow.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
I usually use my phone uh it because it can set times to remind me it is convenient.
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答较为简单,缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议在回答时增加具体例子,并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
Example: Yes, I believe I am good at memorizing things. For instance, I can easily recall many events from my childhood, which helps me in storytelling and learning.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法和表达不够准确的问题,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议改进语法,丰富细节,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last term I missed my online exams, which resulted in zero points for two subjects. It was a terrible experience that taught me to be more organized.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和词汇,并增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my study plans and social appointments. For example, if someone invites me to a party or meeting, I usually make a list or schedule it for the next day.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答较简短且表达不够连贯,建议使用完整句子,增加细节说明,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Example: I usually use my phone to remember important things because it allows me to set reminders with alarms, which is very convenient and helps me stay organized.
× I forgot my exams online last term so I got 0 point in my 2 exams.
✓ I forgot my exams online last term so I got 0 points in my 2 exams.
这里的“point”应该用复数形式“points”,因为分数通常是复数。属于复数问题。
× what people I should met
✓ what people I should meet
动词“meet”在这里应该用原形,因为情态动词“should”后面接动词原形。
× if somebody invites me to join some party or the meeting
✓ if somebody invites me to join some party or a meeting
“some party”后面应该用不定冠词“a”,而不是定冠词“the”,因为这里指的是不特定的聚会。
× I usually use my phone uh it because it can set times to remind me it is convenient.
✓ I usually use my phone because it can set reminders for me; it is convenient.
原句中“set times to remind me”表达不准确,应该用“set reminders for me”更合适,且句子结构需要调整使其更通顺。