Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Yes, it is really easy for me to memorize things, but one of my legs is I can't remember it for a long time. Just a few times I will forget it. It's really hard for me.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Of course I have forgot to copy the files for three for three pages. Just copy it for one pages. It is really a cost of time and I must.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
In my daily life I need to remember the road to the school. I always try to remember it on my phone. I try to write the road down and in.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
As for me, I always use the phone. I try to write the things down on my phone in order to remind me what will happened next day. It is really good too for me.
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“one of my legs”应为“one of my weaknesses”。建议你在回答时注意语法准确性,并且表达要简洁明了。可以先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体说明。
Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, but I sometimes struggle to remember information for a long time. For example, I might forget details after a few days.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不完整且不连贯。建议你使用正确的时态和句子结构,清楚地描述事件的细节,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: Yes, I once forgot to copy three pages of important files and only copied one page. This mistake cost me a lot of time because I had to redo the work.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答内容不够具体,表达不完整且有语法错误。建议你明确说明需要记住的内容,并且用连贯的句子描述你如何记忆。
Example: In my daily life, I need to remember the way to school. To help me, I usually save the route on my phone or write down the directions.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误,如“what will happened”应为“what will happen”。建议你使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式,同时可以补充更多细节说明。
Example: I usually use my phone to remember important things. I write reminders or notes so that I don't forget what I need to do the next day.
× Of course I have forgot to copy the files for three for three pages.
✓ Of course I have forgotten to copy the files for three pages.
这里使用现在完成时,助动词have后面应该接动词的过去分词形式,'forgot'是过去式,正确形式是'forgotten'。
× Just copy it for one pages.
✓ Just copy it for one page.
'pages'是复数,而前面有数量词'one',数量词'one'后面应该接单数名词,故应改为'page'。
× It is really a cost of time and I must.
✓ It really wastes time and I must be careful.
原句结构混乱,'a cost of time'表达不自然,且句尾'and I must'不完整。建议改为更自然的表达。
× I always try to remember it on my phone.
✓ I always try to remember it using my phone.
'remember it on my phone'表达不准确,应该用'using my phone'表示用手机来帮助记忆。
× I try to write the road down and in.
✓ I try to write the directions down.
'write the road down and in'结构不完整且不通顺,改为更自然的表达。
× I try to write the things down on my phone in order to remind me what will happened next day.
✓ I try to write things down on my phone in order to remind myself what will happen the next day.
'remind me'应为'remind myself',反身代词用错;'will happened'时态错误,应为'will happen';'next day'前应加定冠词'the'。
× what will happened next day.
✓ what will happen the next day.
'will'后应接动词原形,'happened'是过去式,错误,应改为'happen'。