Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary like 'note down' instead of 'write down things'.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually note them down on my phone and set reminders in my calendar. This method helps me stay organised, and I'm working on improving my memory skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, about a year ago, I forgot my dentist appointment. Because I missed it, I felt very guilty and had to ask the doctor to reschedule, which wasted a lot of my time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. Avoid using 'like' repeatedly and try to group similar items together. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks such as buying groceries, including vegetables and fruits, and paying bills on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repetition like 'and and' and unclear phrases such as 'get out of time'. Use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I usually write important tasks on my mobile phone or set reminders in my calendar. This helps me stay organised, so I can manage my time well and complete all my work on time.

× Unfortunately I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Unfortunately I'm not good at memorising things.

The verb 'memorising' is the British English spelling, which matches the rest of the transcript's style. Using consistent spelling is important for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, this happened with me about a year ago.

✓ Yes, this happened to me about a year ago.

The phrase 'happened with me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when describing something that occurred to a person.

× I missed my dentist appointment and I feel very guilty that because I have visited doctor's time too and then I have and I have to ask the doctor to reschedule the appointment again and it wasted a lot of my time.

✓ I missed my dentist appointment and I felt very guilty because I had visited the doctor before and I had to ask the doctor to reschedule the appointment again, which wasted a lot of my time.

The sentence contains multiple tense errors: 'feel' should be past tense 'felt' to match 'missed'; 'have visited' should be past perfect 'had visited' to indicate an action before another past action; 'have and I have' is redundant and incorrect; 'wasted' is correct but the sentence structure needs improvement for clarity.

× There are certain things that I have to remember in my daily life, like buying the groceries, vegetables, fruit and like paying the bills and so on.

✓ There are certain things that I have to remember in my daily life, like buying groceries, vegetables, fruit, and paying the bills, and so on.

The article 'the' before 'groceries' is unnecessary because 'groceries' is a general plural noun here. Also, the sentence is improved by removing the repeated 'like' and adding commas for clarity.

× I usually write them on my mobile phone or use my calendar to set a reminder. This helped me to stay organized and and due to this I am able to manage my time well and I now do not get out of time and able to keep able to complete my all work within time.

✓ I usually write them on my mobile phone or use my calendar to set a reminder. This helps me to stay organized, and because of this, I am able to manage my time well. Now, I do not run out of time and am able to complete all my work on time.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency ('helped' should be 'helps' to match present habit), repeated words ('and and'), awkward phrasing ('get out of time'), and redundancy ('keep able to complete my all work'). The correction improves clarity, tense consistency, and natural expression.