Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and slightly long. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising, especially long sentences, because I learn slowly and need more time and effort than others to remember things.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same point. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I rarely forget important things because when something is significant to me, it stays in my memory for a long time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear in parts. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid unnecessary details that may confuse the listener.

Example: I need to remember my daily schedules because I have many activities like studying, part-time work, and private tutorials. Therefore, I write my tasks in a notebook to keep track of them.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use complete sentences. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I remember important things by writing them in my notebook or setting reminders on my phone. Sometimes, I flip through my notebook to remind myself of my tasks.

× this issue or incident will encoded in my brain and I will remember it for the rest of my life

✓ this issue or incident will be encoded in my brain and I will remember it for the rest of my life

The verb 'encoded' is used here as a past participle in the passive voice, so it requires the auxiliary verb 'be' to form 'will be encoded'. Without 'be', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× because it will appears automatically when it is in the and pops up to remind me

✓ because it will appear automatically when it is in there and pops up to remind me

After modal verb 'will', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'appears' should be 'appear'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'there' clarifies the meaning.

× I will remember things based on writing in my notebook or in my because it will appears automatically when it is in the and pops up to remind me

✓ I will remember things by writing in my notebook because it will appear automatically and pop up to remind me

The original sentence is incomplete and has structural issues. 'Based on writing' should be 'by writing' to express the method. Also, the phrase 'or in my' is incomplete and confusing, so it is removed for clarity.