Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and includes a question back to the examiner, which is not necessary. Try to keep your response concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid adding questions or unrelated information.

Example: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things. For instance, I can recall many details from my childhood, which helps me in conversations and learning new information.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete, ending abruptly. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples using linking words to make your response coherent and complete.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, when I am multitasking at work, I sometimes overlook deadlines, which can cause problems later.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and provide specific details about the tasks you need to remember. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember various small tasks and prioritise them to complete them efficiently. Since I work in an office, I have to recall which colleagues are responsible for specific jobs to coordinate effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve flow. Also, watch for small grammar mistakes to make your answer sound more natural.

Example: To remember important things, I write them on sticky notes and place them in a visible spot on my desk. This way, I see them every day when I arrive at the office and can address them promptly.

× I think I have a strong memory towards everything and even the things that happened in my childhood.

✓ I think I have a strong memory of everything, even the things that happened in my childhood.

The phrase 'memory towards' is incorrect; the correct preposition to use with 'memory' is 'of'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11). Using 'memory of' is the standard collocation in English.

× But for my friends and people around me I just pretend I have a bad memory.

✓ But with my friends and people around me, I just pretend I have a bad memory.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here; 'with' is the correct preposition to indicate the people with whom the speaker interacts. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11).

× So you don't remember things clearly?

✓ So, you don't remember things clearly?

A comma is needed after 'So' to correctly structure the sentence and indicate a pause. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× Of course, even people they tend to have a good memory, sometimes they have the chance to forget some important things.

✓ Of course, even people who tend to have a good memory sometimes forget important things.

The original sentence has redundant pronoun 'they' and awkward phrasing. Removing 'they' and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× For example, when you are doing multiple tasks at the same time, you may forget the important things and for example.

✓ For example, when you are doing multiple tasks at the same time, you may forget important things.

The phrase 'and for example' is redundant and incorrect here. Also, 'the important things' should be 'important things' as it refers generally. This is a preposition and article usage error (IDs 11 and 22).

× In my daily life I need to remember some small tasks and prioritize them into solve them one by one.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember some small tasks and prioritize solving them one by one.

The phrase 'prioritize them into solve them' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'prioritize solving them'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× Because I work in the comprehensive office and every day I need to remember like which people what kind of job do I need to.

✓ Because I work in the comprehensive office, every day I need to remember which people have what kind of job.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. The corrected sentence completes the thought and improves clarity. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× For the important things, in case I forget about them or I didn't recall them in time, I just write them down on the sticky note and put it on the noticeable place on my office desk so every day when I arrive in office I can stick to them first.

✓ For important things, in case I forget them or don't recall them in time, I just write them down on sticky notes and put them in a noticeable place on my office desk so every day when I arrive at the office I can check them first.

Several preposition errors: 'forget about them' should be 'forget them'; 'write them down on the sticky note' should be 'write them down on sticky notes'; 'put it on the noticeable place' should be 'put them in a noticeable place'; 'arrive in office' should be 'arrive at the office'; 'stick to them' is incorrect, 'check them' is appropriate. These are preposition and pronoun usage errors (IDs 11 and 12).