Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但有些重复和冗长。建议避免重复表达相同意思，使用更多连接词使回答更连贯。

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget simple details like what I ate yesterday, especially when I'm stressed or busy.

Suggestion: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思。建议完整表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Example: Last year, I forgot about a party with my close friends because I was overwhelmed with tasks and didn't manage my time well. As a result, I missed a special moment with them, which was very disappointing. Since then, I have started using a planner to avoid such mistakes.

Suggestion: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many important things. For example, I must keep track of my school deadlines because forgetting them would negatively affect my grades. Besides that, I also need to remember appointments, such as meetings with teachers.

Suggestion: 回答自然且内容具体，但可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Since my memory is not very good, I rely on tools to help me remember important things. For example, I always set alarms on my mobile phone, which remind me of appointments or tasks at the right time, and this method is really effective.

× Last year I forgot about a party with my close friends because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks and don't manage my time effectively.

✓ Last year I forgot about a party with my close friends because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks and didn't manage my time effectively.

句子中描述的是过去的情况，前半句使用了过去时态"forgot"和"was"，后半句"don't manage"应改为过去时态"didn't manage"，以保持时态一致。

× Since then I have started.

✓ Since then, I have started to manage my time better.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词的宾语或补语，导致句意不明。需要补充完整的内容，使句子结构完整，表达清晰。

× For example, I must always keep track of my school deadlines because if I forgot them, my grades would be effectively negative.

✓ For example, I must always keep track of my school deadlines because if I forget them, my grades would be effectively negative.

条件句中描述的是一般现在时的假设情况，主句使用虚拟语气，条件从句应使用一般现在时"forget"，而不是过去时"forgot"。