Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with a clear example using proper linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, recently I needed to find a small needle from my pen, and I remembered exactly where I had kept it because I always keep my belongings organised on my desk.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas clearly. Also, try to be concise and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I once forgot my 10th standard certificate at home when I went to register for my secondary board exams. This was a big mistake, and since then, I have become more organised to avoid such problems.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific details. Try to directly answer the question with clear examples and use linking words to organise your ideas logically. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Example: In daily life, I need to remember important things like my schedule, food items I need to buy, and how to use technical gadgets such as my mobile phone and computer properly.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your explanation is concise and natural.

Example: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a paper schedule. This helps me organise my tasks and keeps everything in order, so I can find things easily when needed.

× Honestly I go I am quite good about memorizing all of my things.

✓ Honestly, I think I am quite good at memorizing all of my things.

The phrase 'I go I am' is incorrect and confusing. The correct expression is 'I think I am' to express opinion. Also, 'good about memorizing' should be 'good at memorizing' as the correct preposition with 'good' is 'at'.

× Recently that one incident happened that I want to find a small needle of my pen and at the time I also remember that way I should all because I have a proper time should tables where and everything should be kept at a time at its place.

✓ Recently, an incident happened when I wanted to find the small needle of my pen, and at that time I also remembered that I should keep everything in its proper place because I have proper tables where everything should be kept.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and confusing structure. 'Want to find' should be 'wanted to find' (past tense). 'Needle of my pen' is unclear but kept as is. 'I should all because I have a proper time should tables' is incorrect; corrected to 'I should keep everything in its proper place because I have proper tables where everything should be kept.' This clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition use.

× Yes, once a time I did this big mistake because when I go to registration for my secondary board exams at a time, I left my 10th standard certificate at home.

✓ Yes, once I made a big mistake because when I went to register for my secondary board exams, I left my 10th standard certificate at home.

The phrase 'once a time' is incorrect; it should be 'once'. 'Did this big mistake' should be 'made a big mistake' as 'make a mistake' is the correct collocation. 'When I go to registration' should be 'when I went to register' to maintain past tense consistency.

× and from that incidence I am organised all of my things at a property.

✓ and from that incident, I have organized all of my things properly.

'Incidence' is incorrect; the correct word is 'incident'. 'I am organised' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I have organized' to indicate a completed action. 'At a property' is incorrect; it should be 'properly' to describe the manner of organization.

× There are a lot of things that everyone or me should have to be remember in the real life.

✓ There are a lot of things that everyone, including me, should remember in real life.

'Everyone or me' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone, including me'. 'Should have to be remember' is incorrect; it should be 'should remember'. 'In the real life' should be 'in real life' without 'the'.

× First of all, our basic statistics such as our clause, our food items, these things and secondly, we have to encourage knowledge about our Technical College technical gadgets such as mobile phone, computers or their such facilities and also their equipments charges such as.

✓ First of all, our basic information such as our clothes, our food items, and secondly, we have to increase knowledge about our technical gadgets such as mobile phones, computers, and their accessories and chargers.

'Basic statistics' is incorrect; 'basic information' or 'basics' is appropriate. 'Clause' is incorrect; it should be 'clothes'. 'Encourage knowledge' is incorrect; 'increase knowledge' or 'gain knowledge' is better. 'Technical College technical gadgets' is redundant; simplified to 'technical gadgets'. 'Equipments charges' is incorrect; should be 'accessories and chargers'.

× I usually remember all of my things by writing it on a paper schedule and it was a proper pattern that I have drawn where everything should be kept and there will be a place for everything to be kept in a order.

✓ I usually remember all of my things by writing them on a paper schedule, and it is a proper pattern that I have drawn where everything should be kept, and there is a place for everything to be kept in order.

'Writing it on a paper schedule' should be 'writing them' to agree with 'all of my things'. 'It was' should be 'it is' to maintain present tense. 'There will be' should be 'there is' for present tense. 'In a order' should be 'in order' without 'a'.

× These things always minimize my obstacle of finding anything and it should be almost in a proper way.

✓ These things always minimize my difficulty in finding anything, and they are almost always in a proper way.

'Minimize my obstacle' is incorrect; 'minimize my difficulty' or 'make it easier' is better. 'It should be almost in a proper way' is unclear; corrected to 'they are almost always in a proper way' to clarify meaning and correct conjunction use.