Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Yes, I would say I have a good memory. I can easily remember numbers and important days in a short time, and I can I often recall people's name and their faces without much effort.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Yes, I did forget important things such as days of of important exams or work related matters. So I have developed a habit of writing down all my tasks in a planner and set reminders on my phone. The message helps me stay vocalized and ensure that I don't.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
Well, I have to remember to take my vitamins and drink enough water every day to keep fit. Also, I need to remember to manage my work tasks and household responsibilities such as paying bill on time and doing grocery shopping to keep everything running smoothly.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
I rely on my cell phone to remember important things, such as I set reminders and alarms for to keep track of important days and deadlines, and I also use apps like calendars or memos for tasks. They're definitely a big help for my daily life.
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答时语言较自然,但存在重复和语法错误,如“I can I often”。建议避免重复,注意语法准确性,并适当丰富细节。
Example: Yes, I have a good memory. For example, I can quickly remember important dates and people's names, which helps me in social and work situations.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“days of of”,“The message helps me stay vocalized”。建议注意语法准确,表达清晰,并使用连贯的连接词。
Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things like exam dates. Therefore, I now write down all my tasks in a planner and set reminders on my phone to avoid missing anything.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体且结构清晰,但有小错误如“paying bill”。建议注意单复数形式,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: I need to remember to take my vitamins and drink enough water daily to stay healthy. Besides, I have to manage my work tasks and household chores, like paying bills on time and doing grocery shopping, to keep everything organized.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法不完整和重复,如“for to keep track”。建议简化句子结构,确保语法正确,并适当使用连接词。
Example: I rely on my cell phone to remember important things. For instance, I set reminders and alarms to keep track of important dates and deadlines, and I use apps like calendars and memos to organize my tasks.
× I can I often recall people's name and their faces without much effort.
✓ I can often recall people's names and their faces without much effort.
这里“people's name”中的“name”应该用复数形式“names”,因为“people's”表示复数,名词也应保持复数形式。
× such as days of of important exams or work related matters.
✓ such as days of important exams or work-related matters.
“work related matters”中“work related”应连字符连接为“work-related”,表示复合形容词。
× The message helps me stay vocalized and ensure that I don't.
✓ The message helps me stay focused and ensures that I don't forget.
“vocalized”用法错误,应为“focused”表示专注;且“helps”后主语是单数,谓语动词“ensure”应加-s变为“ensures”,且句子不完整,需补充“forget”。
× such as paying bill on time and doing grocery shopping to keep everything running smoothly.
✓ such as paying bills on time and doing grocery shopping to keep everything running smoothly.
“paying bill”中的“bill”应为复数“bills”,因为通常指多项账单。
× I rely on my cell phone to remember important things, such as I set reminders and alarms for to keep track of important days and deadlines, and I also use apps like calendars or memos for tasks.
✓ I rely on my cell phone to remember important things, such as setting reminders and alarms to keep track of important days and deadlines, and I also use apps like calendars or memos for tasks.
“such as I set reminders and alarms for to keep track”结构不正确,应改为“such as setting reminders and alarms to keep track”,使用动名词形式并去掉多余的介词“for”。