Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve natural phrasing. For example, instead of 'like some speech script or like some code', you could say 'such as speech scripts or programming code'. Also, try to keep your answer concise within 3-4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things, especially speech scripts and programming code. I find that practising regularly helps me retain information effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some repetition. Use correct past tense ('forgot' instead of 'forgot') and avoid repeating words like 'really, really'. Also, try to link your feelings to the situation more smoothly.

Example: Yes, I once forgot my Alipay password and couldn't pay for my drink. At that moment, I felt quite anxious and nervous because I didn't know what to do.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and could be more structured. Use correct verb forms ('when I am doing some experiments') and avoid repeating similar words ('remember or memorize'). Also, try to use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember various things such as my codes and passwords. Additionally, when I am doing experiments in the lab, I have to memorise all the data carefully to ensure accuracy.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, say 'I usually write it down' instead of 'write down it'. Also, avoid vague words like 'maybe' and use clearer linking words. Try to be more concise and natural.

Example: I usually write important information down or save it on my computer. Sometimes, I write reminders on sticky notes and stick them on the door or wall where I can easily see them.

× Yeah, I've forgot my password to my Alipay, so I couldn't pay for my drink.

✓ Yeah, I've forgotten my password to my Alipay, so I couldn't pay for my drink.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'I've' (I have), the past participle form 'forgotten' should be used to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× Actually I need to remember a lot of things like my code, my password and sometimes when I doing some experiment I need to remember or memorize all the data from the experiment in the lab.

✓ Actually I need to remember a lot of things like my code, my password and sometimes when I am doing some experiment I need to remember or memorize all the data from the experiment in the lab.

The phrase 'when I doing' is incorrect because the verb 'doing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly.

× I usually write down it or even input it into my computer or laptop and maybe I will write a little tip and stick it to the door.

✓ I usually write it down or even input it into my computer or laptop and maybe I will write a little tip and stick it to the door.

The phrase 'write down it' is incorrect; the pronoun 'it' should come before the phrasal verb 'write down' to form 'write it down'.

× On the door or on the wall I can observely see it.

✓ On the door or on the wall I can clearly see it.

The word 'observely' is not a correct adverb in English. The correct adverb to express the intended meaning is 'clearly'.