Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'forgetting' thay vì 'forget'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, last week my dad asked me to pick up my little brother from school, but I forgot just 15 minutes later, which made him really angry.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh câu dài không hoàn chỉnh và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, I once forgot to turn off the lights when we went out for the whole night. As a result, the lights were left on in the house, which wasted electricity.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ ngữ lặp lại không cần thiết như 'uh', 'umm'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule, such as when to wake up, have breakfast, and train. I also keep track of plans to go out with friends and other important appointments.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng như 'umm', 'uh' và hoàn thành câu trả lời một cách rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Example: I usually write important things down on a notepad, and sometimes I ask my dad to remind me when the time is near. Additionally, I try to read the notes out loud to help me remember better.

× I usually forgetting in such a short amount of time.

✓ I usually forget in such a short amount of time.

The verb 'forget' should be in the base form after 'usually' because 'usually' is an adverb of frequency and is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Using 'forgetting' here is incorrect because it implies a continuous action, which does not fit the context.

× my little brother at his schools.

✓ my little brother at his school.

The word 'schools' is plural, but the context suggests referring to a single school. Using the singular 'school' is correct here because a person typically attends one school at a time.

× Uh, I forget after just 15 minutes after he talked to me and he was really angry.

✓ Uh, I forgot just 15 minutes after he talked to me and he was really angry.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame indicated by 'a week ago' and 'after he talked to me'. Using the present tense 'forget' is incorrect in this past context.

× I'm not quite sure but I think that it was one time that my mum told me to turn off the light when we go out and I forgot.

✓ I'm not quite sure but I think that it was one time that my mum told me to turn off the light when we went out and I forgot.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to maintain consistency with the past event described. Mixing present tense 'go' with past tense 'told' and 'forgot' is incorrect.

× ...and the lights just being left in the house and when we go.

✓ ...and the lights were just left on in the house when we went out.

The phrase 'lights just being left' is incorrect; it should be 'lights were just left on' to correctly use the past passive voice. Also, 'when we go' should be 'when we went out' to maintain past tense consistency. The definite article 'the' is correctly used here.

× Uh, it would be my schedules, uh, when to wake up, umm, umm, when to get breakfast and training.

✓ Uh, it would be my schedule, uh, when to wake up, umm, umm, when to have breakfast and training.

The word 'schedules' is plural, but the context suggests referring to a single daily plan or routine, so 'schedule' in singular is more appropriate. Also, 'get breakfast' is better expressed as 'have breakfast' in this context.

× Everything's in my daily life, uh, and also on my umm, plan to go out with friends or the time I go into.

✓ Everything's in my daily life, uh, and also in my umm, plan to go out with friends or the time I go out.

The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to being part of a plan. Also, 'the time I go into' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'the time I go out' to make sense in context.

× So I usually write them down in a note paper or I just umm, let's just ask my dad to remind me when it is close to the time I need to do stuffs.

✓ So I usually write them down on a piece of paper or I just umm, let's just ask my dad to remind me when it is close to the time I need to do stuff.

'Note paper' is not a common phrase; 'a piece of paper' is correct. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect as 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form.