Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget to do tasks my mom asks me to do, which makes her upset. Because of this, I find memorising quite frustrating.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng câu trả lời còn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cảm xúc hoặc kết quả của việc quên đó.

Example: Yes, I once forgot the day of an important exam. As a result, I had to study all the topics related to the assignment and materials in just one night, which was very stressful.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi bằng cách liệt kê những việc hoặc thông tin quan trọng bạn cần nhớ hàng ngày, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember things like appointments, homework deadlines, and important phone numbers.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về cách bạn ghi nhớ, ví dụ như sử dụng ghi chú hoặc nhờ người khác nhắc nhở.

Example: I often forget things, so I rely on my friends and family to remind me. Also, I try to focus on important tasks by making notes or setting reminders on my phone.

× No I'm not. I'm really bad at memorizing things because when my mom wants to help me and you think I always forget to do that and my mom yelling me all the time so I really bad at it and I think it's too annoying.

✓ No, I'm not. I'm really bad at memorizing things because when my mom wants to help me, you think I always forget to do that, and my mom yells at me all the time, so I'm really bad at it and I think it's too annoying.

The sentence has errors in verb forms and sentence structure. 'My mom yelling me' should be 'my mom yells at me' because 'yell' requires the third person singular form and the preposition 'at'. Also, the sentence lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation, making it confusing. Correcting verb forms and adding commas improves clarity.

× To be honest, I have forgotten about the exam day. I think it is very terrible because I need to study all the topic related to our assignment and study materials. I need to study all of them during one night.

✓ To be honest, I forgot the exam day. I think it was very terrible because I needed to study all the topics related to our assignment and study materials. I had to study all of them during one night.

The sentence mixes present perfect and present tense incorrectly. 'Have forgotten about the exam day' is better as 'forgot the exam day' to indicate a specific past event. 'I need' should be 'I needed' to maintain past tense consistency. 'All the topic' should be 'all the topics' (plural). Using past tense verbs aligns with the past event described.

× I think it is very terrible because I need to study all the topic related to our assignment and study materials.

✓ I think it is very terrible because I need to study all the topics related to our assignment and study materials.

The word 'topic' should be plural 'topics' because it refers to multiple subjects related to the assignment. Using singular form here is incorrect when referring to multiple items.

× How many yellow?

✓ How many yellow things are there?

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a noun after 'yellow'. 'How many yellow?' is unclear; it should specify what is being counted, such as 'How many yellow things are there?'. This correction completes the sentence structure.

× Personally I am a forgotten people so I need my friends and my family tell me to do that or also I focus on the important things are.

✓ Personally, I am a forgetful person, so I need my friends and family to tell me to do things, or I focus on the important things.

'Forgotten people' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'forgetful' and the noun should be 'person' (singular). Also, 'my friends and my family tell me' should be 'my friends and family to tell me' to use the infinitive form after 'need'. The phrase 'or also I focus on the important things are' is ungrammatical and is corrected to 'or I focus on the important things' for clarity.