Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorizing things”，“lift off my clothes”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，同时避免重复和冗余。

Example: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget to close the door when I leave or to take off my clothes after exercising. My mom often tells me to improve my memory.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，如“forgot”应为“forgotten”，句子结构混乱且重复。建议简化句子，使用正确时态，并清晰表达事件和结果。

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once the school asked us to submit an important list, but I forgot to hand it in, which caused me a lot of trouble.

Suggestion: 回答较为清晰，但表达不够自然，如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”，句子结构可以更流畅。建议使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

Example: I need to remember many important tasks every day, so I make a to-do list each morning. This helps me organize my day and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“a method I not from some well known teachers”不通顺。建议使用正确的句子结构，清楚表达方法的来源和效果。

Example: As I mentioned, I use a to-do list to remember important things. I learned this method from some well-known teachers, and it helps me organize my time and be more efficient.

× Well I'm not good at memory things.

✓ Well, I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising'来表示记忆的动作。

× I always forget some important things such as closed door after I go out at lift off my clothes.

✓ I always forget some important things such as closing the door after I go out or taking off my clothes.

'closed door'应改为动名词短语'closing the door'，'at lift off my clothes'结构错误，应改为'or taking off my clothes'。

× My mom always argue that I need to be more memorable.

✓ My mom always argues that I need to be more memorable.

主语是第三人称单数'my mom'，谓语动词应加-s，变为'aruges'。

× I sometimes forgot some important things.

✓ I sometimes forget some important things.

句子时态应与上下文保持一致，表示习惯动作应使用一般现在时'forget'，而非过去时'forgot'。

× The most important things I have forgot is last time when the schools asked us to hand it some important list, I forgot and it gave me lots of it gave me lots of trouble, troubles.

✓ The most important thing I have forgotten is the last time when the school asked us to hand in some important list; I forgot and it gave me lots of trouble.

'have forgot'应为现在完成时的过去分词形式'have forgotten'；'things'应为单数'thing'；'schools'应为单数'school'；'hand it some important list'应为'hand in some important list'；重复的'it gave me lots of'应删除；'troubles'应为不可数名词'trouble'。

× Well, there are lots of important things I need to remember in my daily life, so I choose to make A to do list every day.

✓ Well, there are lots of important things I need to remember in my daily life, so I choose to make a to-do list every day.

'A to do list'应为'a to-do list'，且'to-do'中间需加连字符。

× It marks some important things at my plan of the day or at the start day of study.

✓ It marks some important things in my plan for the day or at the start of the study day.

'at my plan of the day'应改为'in my plan for the day'，'at the start day of study'应改为'at the start of the study day'，介词使用不当。

× Well, as I said before, I make A to do list to remember important things.

✓ Well, as I said before, I make a to-do list to remember important things.

同上，'A to do list'应为'a to-do list'，冠词和连字符使用错误。

× It is a method I not from some well known teachers and it helps me to organize my time and to do things more effective.

✓ It is a method I learned from some well-known teachers and it helps me to organize my time and do things more effectively.

'I not from'结构错误，应为'I learned from'；'well known'应加连字符'well-known'；'to do things more effective'中'adjective'应改为副词'effectively'。