Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ваш ответ немного повторяется и содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь сделать ответ более естественным и лаконичным, избегая повторов и улучшая структуру предложения.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things like dates, numbers, and stories my friends tell me. This ability has always helped me in daily life.

Suggestion: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и избегать повторов, а также уточнять детали.

Example: I rarely forget important things because I use apps and calendars on my phone to remind me. However, I sometimes forget small things like meetings.

Suggestion: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит ошибки. Следует улучшить грамматику, использовать связующие слова и более чётко выражать мысли, избегая повторов.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember to drink two liters of water. Sometimes I forget to drink enough, so I try to keep track of it.

Suggestion: Ответ хороший, но есть небольшие грамматические ошибки и повтор слов. Рекомендуется использовать более разнообразную лексику и связующие слова для плавности.

Example: I usually rely on apps and technology. For example, I take notes of important events, and the app sends me notifications as the dates approach, which helps me remember them.

× I think I could forget something small things like about meetings, but a big and important things I think I would never forget because I I have in telephone some apps or calendar that reminds me some important things.

✓ I think I could forget small things like meetings, but big and important things I think I would never forget because I have some apps or a calendar on my phone that remind me of important things.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms such as 'something small things' and 'a big and important things'. 'Something' is singular and cannot be used with plural 'things'. Also, 'apps or calendar' should be 'apps or a calendar' to correctly use articles. Additionally, 'reminds me some important things' should be 'remind me of important things' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× I have in telephone some apps or calendar that reminds me some important things.

✓ I have some apps or a calendar on my phone that remind me of important things.

The phrase 'in telephone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to devices like phones. Also, 'reminds me some important things' should be 'remind me of important things' to use the correct verb and preposition.

× I think it's drink 2 liters of water in a day.

✓ I think it's drinking 2 liters of water a day.

The phrase 'it's drink' is incorrect because 'it is' should be followed by a gerund ('drinking') to express an activity. Also, 'in a day' is better expressed as 'a day' in this context.

× This not counting to two liter 2 liters.

✓ This does not count towards the two liters.

The sentence lacks a verb and uses incorrect phrasing. 'This not counting to' should be 'This does not count towards'. Also, 'two liter 2 liters' is redundant and inconsistent; 'two liters' is correct.

× Usually I rely on apps and new technology. For example I'm just taking notes some important events and when the dates get closer the the app giving me notifications about these events and that helps me to not forget about it.

✓ Usually I rely on apps and new technology. For example, I just take notes of some important events, and when the dates get closer, the app gives me notifications about these events, and that helps me not to forget them.

The phrase 'I'm just taking notes some important events' is incorrect; it should be 'I just take notes of some important events'. Also, 'the app giving me notifications' should be 'the app gives me notifications' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct tense. 'Helps me to not forget about it' is better as 'helps me not to forget them' for clarity and correctness.