Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên chia câu thành các phần rõ ràng hơn, sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "make" thành "makes" để câu đúng ngữ pháp.

Example: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I have to study many subjects in one day. Therefore, I usually review all of them at night, which makes it easier for me to remember the information.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (forgot nên là forgotten) và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important, like missing my homework. This happened because I was overwhelmed with exams and subjects, and I didn't have a proper time management plan.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như "A to do list" nên là "a to-do list", "help me priority tasks" nên là "helps me prioritize tasks". Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng đúng dạng từ và chia động từ phù hợp để câu tự nhiên hơn.

Example: In daily life, it's important to stay organized and manage time effectively. For example, keeping a to-do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, cấu trúc câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, chú ý chia động từ đúng và sắp xếp câu hợp lý.

Example: In the past, I didn't have any method to memorize important things. But now, I realize that making a to-do list and prioritizing necessary tasks helps me remember better.

× Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I have to study many subjects one day I so I usually review all of them at night to help me remember better.

✓ Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I have to study many subjects in one day, so I usually review all of them at night to help me remember better.

The original sentence is missing the preposition 'in' before 'one day' and lacks proper punctuation, which affects clarity. Adding 'in' correctly indicates the time frame, and adding a comma before 'so' separates the clauses properly.

× This method make it easier for me to keep information in my mind.

✓ This method makes it easier for me to keep information in my mind.

The subject 'method' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. Using 'make' is incorrect for singular subjects.

× Yes, I have forgot something necessary to me such as missing my homework.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something necessary to me such as missing my homework.

After 'have', the past participle form 'forgotten' should be used instead of the simple past 'forgot'. This is a common error with present perfect tense.

× This happened because I was buried in exams and as a subjects and I don't have a plan to manage my time.

✓ This happened because I was buried in exams and subjects, and I didn't have a plan to manage my time.

The phrase 'and as a subjects' is incorrect and confusing. It should be simplified to 'and subjects'. Also, the tense should be consistent; 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to match the past context.

× For example, keeping A to do list help me priority tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibility.

✓ For example, keeping a to-do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Priority' should be the verb 'prioritize'. 'Responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' to match the context.

× Is the past I didn't have any method to memorizing important things, but now I realize that I can take I can make A to do list and priorities what and priorities what necessary.

✓ In the past, I didn't have any method for memorizing important things, but now I realize that I can make a to-do list and prioritize what is necessary.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'Is the past' should be 'In the past'; 'method to memorizing' should be 'method for memorizing'; 'take I can make A to do list' is redundant and incorrect, should be 'make a to-do list'; 'priorities what and priorities what necessary' is repetitive and incorrect, should be 'prioritize what is necessary'.