Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法不够准确，句子结构不完整，且表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，并且用更地道的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I think I am quite good at memorising things because since I was young, I have been able to memorise more than 10 English vocabulary words in one day.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达原因，并避免语法错误。

Example: Oh yes, recently I have often forgotten to carry my keys because I usually leave them somewhere and then forget where they are.

Suggestion: 回答内容较丰富，但部分表达不自然，如“go brushing my teeth”。建议使用正确的动词形式和更自然的表达。

Example: Well, I have to remember various things every day, such as brushing my teeth, cleaning my room, and having lunch and dinner on time.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“write down every important things there so I will mess up”。建议使用正确的语法和更清晰的表达。

Example: Well, I usually make a list on my phone. I downloaded a to-do list app and write down all important things there so that I don't forget them.

× Memorized more than 10 English vocabulary in one day.

✓ Memorized more than 10 English vocabulary words in one day.

“vocabulary”是不可数名词，表示词汇量，不能直接用数字修饰。这里应使用可数名词“vocabulary words”表示具体的单词数量。

× I keep forgetting to carry keys with me recently.

✓ I have been forgetting to carry my keys with me recently.

“recently”表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成进行时态“have been forgetting”来表达持续发生的动作。

× I think it definitely it's because I live it somewhere that I'm.

✓ I think it's definitely because I left it somewhere.

句中“live it”应为“left it”，动词错误；“that I'm”结构不完整，应删除。

× such as go brushing my teeth, cleaning up my room, or even having lunch and dinner.

✓ such as brushing my teeth, cleaning up my room, or even having lunch and dinner.

“such as”后面应接动名词形式，不能用“go brushing”，应去掉“go”。

× I downloaded A to do list app in my phone and write down every important things there so I will mess up.

✓ I downloaded a to-do list app on my phone and write down every important thing there so I won't mess up.

“A”应小写且“to do list”应加连字符；“in my phone”应为“on my phone”；“every important things”中“every”后应接单数名词“thing”；“will mess up”应为否定形式“won't mess up”以符合语境。