Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu động từ 'am' trong 'I quite good'. Bạn nên chia câu thành các câu ngắn hơn để tránh dài dòng và sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things such as numbers and important dates. For example, I always remember my parents' anniversary and my graduation day because these events are indispensable parts of my life.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I never forgotten' nên là 'I have never forgotten'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý trong câu trả lời.

Example: I have never forgotten anything important because I always set reminders on my phone and write down my plans. This helps me remember my daily schedule effectively.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'purchase' nên là 'shopping' hoặc 'things to buy'. Câu trả lời cũng nên được tổ chức rõ ràng hơn với các từ nối để liệt kê các việc cần nhớ một cách mạch lạc.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things such as shopping lists, household chores like cleaning and washing, and upcoming events or activities.

Suggestion: Bạn nên hoàn chỉnh câu, ví dụ 'set reminders on my' cần thêm từ như 'phone'. Ngoài ra, câu 'smartphone is unusual equipment' không chính xác, bạn nên dùng từ 'useful' hoặc 'convenient'. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I always set reminders on my phone to remember important things. Sometimes, I write down my plans in a notebook. I think smartphones are very useful because they are portable and convenient to carry anywhere.

× Yes I quite good at memorizing things like numbers and days or my parents anniversary are some my important events in my life such as graduation day or ceremony because I think these are indispensable part in my life.

✓ Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things like numbers and days. My parents' anniversary is one of my important events in my life, such as graduation day or ceremony, because I think these are indispensable parts of my life.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' which is necessary for the present tense. 'Parents anniversary' should be possessive as 'parents' anniversary'. 'Are some my important events' is incorrect; it should be 'is one of my important events' to agree in number. 'Indispensable part' should be plural 'parts' to match 'these'. Also, the sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity.

× I have never forgotten something important because I always set reminders on my and write down my planning so I never forgotten.

✓ I have never forgotten something important because I always set reminders on my phone and write down my plans, so I have never forgotten.

The phrase 'I never forgotten' is incorrect; it should be 'I have never forgotten' to maintain present perfect tense. 'Write down my planning' is better as 'write down my plans'. Also, 'set reminders on my' is incomplete; 'phone' is added for clarity.

× I always remember in my mind like everyday schedule.

✓ I always remember things in my mind, like my everyday schedule.

The phrase 'remember in my mind' is awkward; adding 'things' clarifies the object. 'Everyday schedule' needs a possessive pronoun 'my' to specify whose schedule.

× In my daily life, I have to remember numerous things such as my purchase, my household chores like cleaning and washing or some events or about some activities.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember numerous things such as my purchases, my household chores like cleaning and washing, some events, or some activities.

'Purchase' should be plural 'purchases' to match 'numerous things'. The phrase 'or about some activities' is awkward; 'or some activities' is clearer. Commas are added for better sentence structure.

× I always set reminders on my to remember important things.

✓ I always set reminders on my phone to remember important things.

The phrase 'on my' is incomplete; the object 'phone' is necessary to complete the prepositional phrase.

× Sometimes I write down my plans in my notebook to be remembered.

✓ Sometimes I write down my plans in my notebook to help me remember them.

'To be remembered' is passive and unclear. Using 'to help me remember them' clarifies the purpose and uses active voice.

× But I think smartphone is unusual equipment to remember because it is portable and convenient to bring anywhere.

✓ But I think a smartphone is a useful device to help me remember because it is portable and convenient to bring anywhere.

'Unusual equipment to remember' is incorrect; 'useful device to help me remember' is appropriate. Also, 'smartphone' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Equipment' is uncountable, so 'device' is better here.