Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「memorizing something」より「memorizing things」の方が自然です。また、例の説明で「because of high ability of memorizing」は「because I have a good memory」などの方が自然です。さらに、文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げると良いでしょう。

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I was in high school, I got the highest score in history because I have a good memory and can remember facts easily.

Suggestion: 文法ミス（"never forgotten"は"have never forgotten"が正しい）や不自然な表現が多いです。また、話し言葉の「あー」「うー」が多く、流暢さを損なっています。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

Example: I have never forgotten anything important because I always pay attention to significant events, such as important meetings or classes. I review my schedule every night to make sure I don't miss anything.

Suggestion: 内容は理解できますが、文が長くて分かりにくいです。文法の誤りや不自然な表現もあります。例えば、「working schedule」より「work schedule」が自然です。接続詞を使い、文を分けて明確に伝えましょう。

Example: In daily life, I need to remember my work schedule because work is the most important task. Since I spend more time working than on other activities, I have to pay special attention to it.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば、「I download it and the put tasks」は「I downloaded it and put tasks」や「I use it to put tasks」の方が自然です。また、「how what task is every day and every time」は意味が不明瞭です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

Example: I always use a calendar app on my phone. I enter my tasks into the app, and it reminds me of what I need to do and when. This method is very useful for me.

× Yes, I'm confident with memorizing something.

✓ Yes, I'm confident with memorizing things.

The phrase 'memorizing something' is less natural here; 'memorizing things' is more appropriate to express general ability. Also, 'confident with' should be 'confident in' but since it's not in the list, we focus on the verb form.

× Yes, I'm confident with memorizing something.

✓ Yes, I'm confident in memorizing things.

The correct preposition after 'confident' is 'in', not 'with'. So, 'confident in memorizing things' is correct.

× because of high ability of memorizing, I got the highest score in history which require memorizing skill.

✓ because of my high ability to memorize, I got the highest score in history which requires memorizing skills.

'Ability' needs a possessive determiner 'my'. 'Require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular 'history'. 'Memorizing skill' should be plural 'memorizing skills' to match general meaning.

× which require memorizing skill.

✓ which requires memorizing skills.

The verb 'require' must agree with the singular subject 'history', so it should be 'requires'. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills'.

× Actually, I never forgotten something important, umm, because I always care about the significant event, uh, such as important meeting and important class umm.

✓ Actually, I have never forgotten something important, umm, because I always care about significant events, uh, such as important meetings and important classes, umm.

The verb 'forgotten' needs an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense: 'have never forgotten'. Also, plural forms 'events', 'meetings', and 'classes' are more natural here.

× So because I reflect tomorrow's schedule every night, I never missed it.

✓ So because I review tomorrow's schedule every night, I never miss it.

The verb 'reflect' is not used correctly here; 'review' is more appropriate. Also, tense consistency requires present tense 'never miss' instead of past 'never missed'.

× I think we need to remember a working schedule in our daily life because working is the most important task in daily life and we need to spend longer time other than others tasks so we need to care about it most.

✓ I think we need to remember a work schedule in our daily life because work is the most important task in daily life and we need to spend more time on it than on other tasks, so we need to care about it most.

'Working schedule' should be 'work schedule'. 'Spend longer time other than others tasks' is incorrect; it should be 'spend more time on it than on other tasks'.

× I think we need to remember a working schedule in our daily life because working is the most important task in daily life and we need to spend longer time other than others tasks so we need to care about it most.

✓ I think we need to remember a work schedule in our daily life because work is the most important task in daily life and we need to spend more time on it than on other tasks, so we need to care about it most.

The phrase 'spend longer time other than others tasks' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'spend more time on it than on other tasks'.

× I always use calendar app on my phone.

✓ I always use a calendar app on my phone.

The phrase 'use calendar app' is missing the article 'a' before 'calendar app'.

× I always use calendar app on my phone.

✓ I always use a calendar app on my phone.

The noun phrase 'calendar app' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is singular and countable.

× I download it and the put tasks in that app and it can remind me at the time and how what task is every day and every time.

✓ I downloaded it and then put tasks in that app, and it can remind me at the right time about what tasks I have every day and every time.

The sentence has several issues: 'download' should be past tense 'downloaded' to match context; 'the put' is incorrect, should be 'then put'; 'at the time and how what task is' is unclear and needs rephrasing to 'at the right time about what tasks I have'.

× I download it and the put tasks in that app and it can remind me at the time and how what task is every day and every time.

✓ I downloaded it and then put tasks in that app, and it can remind me at the right time about what tasks I have every day and every time.

The verb 'download' should be in past tense 'downloaded' to indicate completed action.