Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显简单，且部分表达不够连贯。建议使用更多连接词使回答更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

Example: Yes, I used to be quite good at memorising things, especially before I turned 18. For instance, I could remember content after reading it just once. However, recently, because I often stay up late, my memory has deteriorated significantly.

Suggestion: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，使用了连接词“so”和“luckily”，但部分表达略显口语化。建议适当丰富词汇，提升表达正式度。

Example: Yes, recently I forgot the deadline to register for an important competition for my team. When I realized this, I felt shocked and worried. Therefore, I immediately contacted the organizer via email, and fortunately, they were understanding, allowing us to still participate.

Suggestion: 回答较简短，缺少连接词和细节支持。建议扩展内容，使用连接词并提供更多具体例子，使回答更丰富。

Example: In my daily life, I usually need to remember important deadlines, such as when to submit essays or presentations. Additionally, I have to keep track of project milestones to ensure timely completion.

Suggestion: 回答内容完整且结构合理，但句子稍长且部分表达重复。建议分句表达并使用更多连接词，使语言更自然流畅。

Example: Generally, I use my smartphone to keep track of important tasks. I have downloaded an app that sets reminders, which helps me stay organized and focused. As a result, I rarely miss any important deadlines.

× For example, I can revise a content as long as I read them once.

✓ For example, I can revise content as long as I read it once.

content 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式的代词 them 来指代，应该用单数代词 it。

× But now I started to stay up late and my memory has worsened a lot.

✓ But now I have started staying up late and my memory has worsened a lot.

started 后面接动名词形式表示开始做某事，不能用不定式。

× so I emailed with the organizer as soon as possible and luckily they were understanding and we still got the opportunity to participate.

✓ so I emailed the organizer as soon as possible and luckily they were understanding and we still got the opportunity to participate.

动词 email 后面直接接宾语，不需要介词 with。

× Generally, I use my smartphones to keep track of the crucial tasks.

✓ Generally, I use my smartphone to keep track of the crucial tasks.

通常人们用单数形式 smartphone 指代自己的手机，除非有多部手机。

× I have downloaded an application which can set reminders and this habit help me keep organized and focused on my important tasks and I won't miss them.

✓ I have downloaded an application which can set reminders and this habit helps me keep organized and focused on my important tasks and I won't miss them.

主语 this habit 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 help 应该加 s。