Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget small items. For example, I once forgot my house keys and couldn't get inside, which was very frustrating.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Example: Yes, I once forgot to complete my daily iOS tasks, so I lost my points. As a result, my mother was very upset, which made me feel uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu văn rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ phù hợp và tránh câu bị cắt ngang hoặc thiếu từ.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as daily tasks. I try to complete them as soon as possible to meet deadlines, so I usually set reminders on my phone.

Suggestion: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời với cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ cách bạn ghi nhớ các việc quan trọng.

Example: To remember important things, I usually write them down in my reminder app. This helps me meet deadlines on time and stay organized, preventing me from forgetting tasks.

× I'm not really expert at memorising things as I find, but I have so many things to remember every day.

✓ I'm not really an expert at memorising things, as I find, but I have so many things to remember every day.

The sentence is missing the article 'an' before the noun 'expert'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'an' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× For example, I usually forget small items like my key to home so once I got trouble with my house door so I can get in which is really.

✓ For example, I usually forget small items like my house key, so once I had trouble with my door and couldn't get in, which was really frustrating.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: missing articles, incorrect verb tense, and incomplete thoughts. 'My key to home' should be 'my house key'. 'Once I got trouble' should be 'once I had trouble'. The phrase 'so I can get in which is really' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'and couldn't get in, which was really frustrating' to complete the thought clearly.

× Yes, I once had forgotten to do my iOS daily tabs and I couldn't do it again.

✓ Yes, I once forgot to do my iOS daily tasks and couldn't do them again.

The phrase 'had forgotten' is past perfect, which is unnecessary here; simple past 'forgot' is more appropriate. Also, 'tabs' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; 'tasks' fits better. 'Couldn't do it again' is corrected to 'couldn't do them again' to agree with the plural 'tasks'.

× This result in the fact that I don't have my points, so my mother got furious with me, which is really uncomfortable to me.

✓ This resulted in me not getting my points, so my mother got furious with me, which was really uncomfortable for me.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'This result in the fact' should be 'This resulted in'. 'I don't have my points' should be 'me not getting my points' to fit the past context. 'Which is really uncomfortable to me' is corrected to 'which was really uncomfortable for me' for proper expression.

× In my daily life, I have to remember a lot of things like the daily talks for example.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember a lot of things, like daily tasks, for example.

'Daily talks' is likely a mistake; 'daily tasks' is more appropriate. Also, a comma is added before 'for example' for clarity.

× Therefore, I usually set it on the reminder of.

✓ Therefore, I usually set it on my reminder app.

The phrase 'on the reminder of' is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to 'on my reminder app' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× To remember such important things, I usually note these on my reminder app as it can help me to do the deadline on time of.

✓ To remember such important things, I usually note them on my reminder app as it helps me meet deadlines on time.

The phrase 'help me to do the deadline on time of' is incorrect and unclear. It is corrected to 'helps me meet deadlines on time' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Furthermore, it also helped me to stay organized and avoid avoid me from.

✓ Furthermore, it also helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting things.

The original sentence has repetition ('avoid avoid') and incomplete phrasing ('avoid me from'). It is corrected to 'helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting things' to complete the thought and fix grammar.