Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có nhiều từ thừa, nên cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I always pay attention to the places of objects and special details around my house or on the roads. This helps me easily notice any changes.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ lý do cụ thể.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes because I am very busy with many tasks. For example, I once missed an important appointment because I didn't write it down.

Suggestion: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ chính xác như 'ID card' thay vì 'identify card' và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember personal information such as phone numbers, ID card details, and my relatives' phone numbers in case I need help.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên tránh dùng từ thừa như 'like' nhiều lần và sửa lỗi nhỏ như 'a event' thành 'an event'. Hãy nói tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I have several ways to remember important things. First, I write them down and stick notes in places I often visit at home. Second, I add events to my phone calendar so it can notify me on time.

× I am always taking notice of like the places of things or like some special thing I have seen in my in the roads or even around my house and I always easily to like point out the changes.

✓ I am always taking notice of the places of things or some special things I have seen on the roads or even around my house and I can easily point out the changes.

The phrase 'I always easily to like point out' is incorrect because 'to' should not be used before 'like point out'. Also, 'like' is used excessively and unnecessarily. The verb phrase should be 'I can easily point out'. Additionally, 'in the roads' should be 'on the roads' as the correct preposition for roads is 'on'.

× Of course I have because we just like human and we can have like supernatural ability that we can remember everything.

✓ Of course I have because we are just like humans and we do not have supernatural ability to remember everything.

The pronoun 'we' is correct but 'human' should be plural 'humans' to match the subject. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and 'can have like supernatural ability' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have supernatural ability'.

× And I do have forgotten because sometime I've been so busy with my hair to have a schedule with many to do tasks so that I like.

✓ And I have forgotten because sometimes I've been so busy with my work to have a schedule with many tasks to do.

The phrase 'I do have forgotten' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have forgotten'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'My hair' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'my work'. The phrase 'many to do tasks' should be 'many tasks to do'.

× I just meet some really important one occasionally.

✓ I just miss some really important ones occasionally.

The verb 'meet' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'miss' (fail to remember). Also, 'one' should be plural 'ones' to match 'some'.

× I would say things related to our personal information like phone numbers or our CC, our our identify card and some of course our relative phone numbers in case we need some help.

✓ I would say things related to our personal information like phone numbers, our ID cards, and of course our relatives' phone numbers in case we need some help.

'Identify card' is incorrect; the correct term is 'ID card' or 'identity card'. It should be plural 'ID cards' to match 'our'. Also, 'relative phone numbers' should be 'relatives' phone numbers' to show possession.

× Or second, I could like note them directly into the calendar as a event in my phone so that it can notify me when the time is coming.

✓ Or second, I could note them directly into the calendar as an event in my phone so that it can notify me when the time is coming.

The article 'a' before 'event' is incorrect because 'event' starts with a vowel sound; it should be 'an event'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed.