Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is honest but could be more natural and clear. Avoid using informal or negative words like 'dumb' and unclear terms like 'pyramid pulse'. Try to explain your difficulty in a simple and positive way, and keep your answer concise.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things because of some health issues that affect my memory. However, I'm working on improving it by using different techniques.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit hesitant and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly and confidently. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'.

Example: I can't recall a specific time when I forgot something important because I always write things down and keep notes in my calendar to help me remember.

Suggestion: Your answer covers relevant details but could be more organized and fluent. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid unnecessary pauses. Try to group related items together for clarity.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my pills and vitamins. Besides that, I also keep track of my husband and family's schedules to help organize their activities, and I make sure to feed my dog on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'as I mentioned' and use clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I usually write important things down and set push notifications on my calendar. This method helps me remember important tasks effectively.

× Because of my pyramid pulse and also some hormonal changes, it becomes more and more difficult to memorize things and I'm trying to deal with that.

✓ Because of my rapid pulse and also some hormonal changes, it becomes more and more difficult to memorize things and I'm trying to deal with that.

The phrase 'pyramid pulse' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct term is 'rapid pulse'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but correcting it improves clarity.

× I tried to uh, write uh, everything down and also I am noting in my calendars.

✓ I tried to, uh, write everything down and also I am noting it in my calendar.

The phrase 'noting in my calendars' is awkward and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'noting it in my calendar' (singular). Also, 'calendars' should be singular unless the person uses multiple calendars, which is unlikely here.

× I need to remember my pills, uh, my vitamins, and also I have to remember the schedule of my husband and my family to help them to organize everything and also to feed my dog.

✓ I need to remember my pills, uh, my vitamins, and also I have to remember the schedules of my husband and my family to help them organize everything and also to feed my dog.

The word 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' because it refers to multiple people (husband and family) each having their own schedule. Also, 'help them to organize' is better as 'help them organize' for natural English.

× I have to remember the schedule of my husband and my family to help them to organize everything and also to feed my dog.

✓ I have to remember the schedules of my husband and my family to help them organize everything and also to feed my dog.

The phrase 'help them to organize' is grammatically correct but in natural English, 'help them organize' is preferred. The preposition 'to' after 'help' is often omitted.

× I use those push up notifications from my calendar and I think that I can deal with important things that I have to memorize.

✓ I use those push notifications from my calendar and I think that I can deal with important things that I have to memorize.

The phrase 'push up notifications' is incorrect. The correct term is 'push notifications'. 'Push up' is a different phrase unrelated to notifications.