Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
I will say yes, I tend to memorize stuff at quite a fast pace.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
I forgot my calculator for my physics practical exam just a few months ago and it was quite an intense situation so I had to do was run to the maths office to borrow a calculator.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
For me it will be important time stamps on a daily basis, so during weekdays I need to get up at around 6:40 to go to the bathroom and then eat lunch and leave home at around 7:40 to head to school where my classes start at 8:10.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
I rely on daily routines so this is saying that goes practice makes perfect and I believe that is true. So by repeating the thing many and many times it becomes more of a habit. So that way it's way easier than brute forcing me myself to remember it.
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较为简短且缺乏具体细节,建议增加具体例子或说明来丰富内容,使回答更自然流畅。
Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can quickly remember new vocabulary words by associating them with images or stories, which helps me retain information effectively.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体,但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误,建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更清晰。
Example: Yes, a few months ago, I forgot my calculator during a physics practical exam. It was stressful, so I quickly ran to the maths office to borrow one and managed to finish the exam on time.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中信息较多但表达不够连贯,建议使用连接词并简化表达,同时注意语法准确性。
Example: In my daily life, I need to remember important times. For instance, I wake up at 6:40 am, have breakfast, and leave home by 7:40 am to reach school before my classes start at 8:10 am.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并用更准确的表达方式说明观点。
Example: I remember important things by following daily routines. As the saying goes, 'practice makes perfect.' By repeating tasks regularly, they become habits, making it easier to remember without much effort.
× I forgot my calculator for my physics practical exam just a few months ago and it was quite an intense situation so I had to do was run to the maths office to borrow a calculator.
✓ I forgot my calculator for my physics practical exam just a few months ago and it was quite an intense situation, so all I had to do was run to the maths office to borrow a calculator.
句子中缺少了“all”来完整表达“我所要做的只是跑去数学办公室借计算器”,导致句子结构不完整。需要补充“all”使句子完整,符合过去时态的表达。
× So that way it's way easier than brute forcing me myself to remember it.
✓ So that way it's way easier than brute forcing myself to remember it.
“me myself”是错误的代词用法,正确的反身代词是“myself”,表示“我自己”。应去掉“me”只保留“myself”。