Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: "To have with this", "signals and organize"). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn để câu trả lời trở nên rõ ràng và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: I have a good memory for things that interest me. However, I sometimes struggle to remember details unless I write them down. To help with this, I often use a mobile app to organize information, which makes it easier to remember.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: "sometimes I forget", "This usually cost me to waste time"). Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để tránh lỗi sai.

Example: Yes, I often forget important things, especially when I go shopping. For instance, I sometimes forget to buy essential items like milk or bread because I don't make a shopping list. As a result, I waste time and have to return to the store later.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: "task" nên là "tasks", "align set alarm" không chính xác). Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để tăng tính chính xác.

Example: On a daily basis, I need to remember my homework, tasks, and personal events. I also try not to forget important occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. To keep track of everything, I use my digital calendar and set alarms.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá đơn giản và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "Sometime" nên là "Sometimes", "putting sticky notes on my deck" không chính xác). Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để tránh lỗi sai, đồng thời mở rộng câu trả lời để phong phú hơn.

Example: I usually write everything down in my phone or notebook. Sometimes, I set reminders so I don't forget. Additionally, I repeat important details to myself, and putting sticky notes on my desk helps me a lot.

× To have with this, I often use a mobile app to signals and organize information which make it easy to remember.

✓ To deal with this, I often use a mobile app to signal and organize information which makes it easy to remember.

The phrase 'To have with this' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To deal with this'. Also, 'signals' should be the base form 'signal' after 'to' because 'to' is a particle for the infinitive form. Additionally, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'information'.

× For example, I sometimes I forget to buy essential items like mail or bread because I don't make a shopping list.

✓ For example, I sometimes forget to buy essential items like milk or bread because I don't make a shopping list.

The word 'mail' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'milk' as a common essential grocery item. Also, the repeated 'I' is redundant and should be removed.

× This usually cost me to waste time and have to go back to the store later.

✓ This usually causes me to waste time and have to go back to the store later.

The verb 'cost' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'causes' to indicate the effect. Also, 'cost' does not take 'to' after it in this context.

× On a daily basis I need to remember my homework, task and personal events, and I try not to forget important events like birthdays or anniversaries.

✓ On a daily basis I need to remember my homework, tasks and personal events, and I try not to forget important events like birthdays or anniversaries.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural context with 'homework' and 'personal events'.

× And to keep track of everything I use my own digital calendar and align set alarm.

✓ And to keep track of everything I use my own digital calendar and set alarms.

The phrase 'align set alarm' is incorrect; it should be 'set alarms'. 'Align' is unnecessary and 'alarm' should be plural to match the context.

× Sometime I set reminders so I don't forget.

✓ Sometimes I set reminders so I don't forget.

The adverb 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× Uh. I also repeat important details and putting sticky notes on my deck also help me a lot.

✓ Uh. I also repeat important details and putting sticky notes on my desk also helps me a lot.

The phrase 'putting sticky notes' should be parallel with 'repeat', so it should be 'put sticky notes'. Also, 'deck' is incorrect; it should be 'desk'. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'putting sticky notes'.