Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为简单，缺少具体细节和连贯的表达。建议在回答时增加具体例子，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often use techniques like repetition and association. For example, when studying vocabulary, I link new words to familiar images, which helps me remember them better.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

Example: No, I rarely forget important things because I always write them down in my To Do List. This method helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss any important tasks.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更清晰的句子，分开不同内容，并使用连接词。

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember important deadlines like assignments or exams because they affect my studies. Additionally, I try to remember my family and friends' birthdays so I can prepare gifts for them.

Suggestion: 回答较为简单且重复之前内容，缺少丰富细节。建议扩展回答，说明写下重要事项的具体方法和效果。

Example: I usually write important tasks in my To Do List, which I check regularly. Sometimes, I also set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget anything important.

× I often write down the important things in my To Do List to remind me of doing that important thing.

✓ I often write down the important things in my To Do List to remind me to do that important thing.

动词 remind 后面应接不定式 to do，而不是动名词 doing。这里用 to do 更符合英语习惯。

× So yeah, I think it's awful to for forget something important that will disrupt our daily life.

✓ So yeah, I think it's awful to forget something important that will disrupt our daily life.

短语中 'to for forget' 是错误的，正确用法是 'to forget'，不需要加 for。

× So I prefer to write down something to remind me.

✓ So I prefer to write down something to remind myself.

动词 remind 后面接反身代词 myself，表示提醒自己。

× I think the most important thing is that I need to remember what was crisis or assignment that I need to do tomorrow or today that was really, that is really important for a student basically.

✓ I think the most important thing is that I need to remember what crisis or assignment I need to do today or tomorrow, which is really important for a student basically.

原句结构混乱，时态和从句使用不当，调整语序和时态使句子更通顺。

× And also I need to remember what's the birthday of my friend or my parents 'cause I need to buy a gift for them.

✓ And also I need to remember the birthdays of my friends or my parents because I need to buy gifts for them.

'what's the birthday' 用法错误，应为 'the birthdays'；friends 应用复数；'cause' 应用完整形式 because；gift 应用复数 gifts。

× I write down those important things on my To Do List to remind me of doing and finishing that important tasks.

✓ I write down those important things on my To Do List to remind me to do and finish those important tasks.

remind 后应接不定式 to do 和 to finish，而不是动名词 doing 和 finishing；tasks 应用复数 those important tasks。