Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra thap vivaran haru jodne bela ma sambandhit linking words jastai 'because' ya 'however' prayog garnu parcha. Tapai ko uttar thulo ra avashyakta bhanda dherai lamo cha, jasle prabhav kam garna sakcha.

Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things that interest me because I find it easier to focus on topics I enjoy. However, I struggle to remember information that does not capture my attention for a long time.

Suggestion: Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu bhayeko cha tara uttar ma thap spashta tatha prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'however' ko prayog ramro cha, tara sentence haru lai thap sangathit ra sankshipta banau. Tapai le thap udaharan ya karan haru samet dinu saknu huncha.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times, which I regret. However, to avoid this, I make notes regularly, which helps me remember important tasks and deadlines.

Suggestion: Tapai ko uttar ma anavashyak filler shabda haru jastai 'uh' hataunu parcha ra sentence haru lai spashta ra sankshipta banau. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra thap vivaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'especially' ko prayog ramro cha. Tapai le thap udaharan ya karan haru samet dinu saknu huncha.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially the subjects I study at college. This helps me prepare for exams and apply the knowledge in practical situations.

Suggestion: Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu bhayeko cha tara sentence haru thap spashta ra sangathit banau. Linking words jastai 'so that' ko prayog ramro cha, tara sentence haru lai thap sankshipta ra prabhavit banau. Tapai le thap udaharan ya karan haru samet dinu saknu huncha.

Example: I remember important things by writing them in my notes, using phone applications, or keeping a diary. This way, I don't forget tasks and can complete them before deadlines, which makes my work easier and less stressful.

× I think I would say I am at need for memorizing things.

✓ I think I would say I am in need of memorizing things.

The phrase 'at need for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in need of'. Also, 'memorizing' is correctly used as a gerund after 'in need of'. This correction improves prepositional usage and idiomatic expression.

× I think I would say I am at need for memorizing things.

✓ I think I would say I am in need of memorizing things.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'need'; the correct phrase is 'in need of'. This is a common prepositional error that affects the meaning and naturalness of the sentence.

× I can memorize things which are of my interest, but about those things which are out of my interest, I don't usually memorize them for a long time.

✓ I can memorize things which interest me, but for those things which do not interest me, I don't usually memorize them for a long time.

The phrase 'of my interest' is not idiomatic; 'which interest me' is more natural. Also, 'about those things which are out of my interest' is awkward; 'for those things which do not interest me' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× However, I try to not forget things by writing in my notes.

✓ However, I try not to forget things by writing in my notes.

The correct placement of 'not' with 'try to' is 'try not to' rather than 'try to not'. This is a common modal verb usage rule in English.

× I remember important things by writing on my note, application of a phone or writing down in my diary so that I can I won't forget those things which are important and I can perform those things before deadline.

✓ I remember important things by writing in my notebook, using a phone application, or writing in my diary so that I won't forget those important things and can complete them before the deadline.

The phrase 'writing on my note' should be 'writing in my notebook'. 'Application of a phone' is better expressed as 'using a phone application'. Also, 'writing down in my diary' is simplified to 'writing in my diary'. These corrections improve prepositional and noun usage, and sentence clarity.

× I remember important things by writing on my note, application of a phone or writing down in my diary so that I can I won't forget those things which are important and I can perform those things before deadline.

✓ I remember important things by writing in my notebook, using a phone application, or writing in my diary so that I won't forget those important things and can complete them before the deadline.

The conjunction 'or' is correctly used to list methods, but the sentence had redundancy and awkward phrasing. The correction improves conjunction use and sentence flow.

× I remember important things by writing on my note, application of a phone or writing down in my diary so that I can I won't forget those things which are important and I can perform those things before deadline.

✓ I remember important things by writing in my notebook, using a phone application, or writing in my diary so that I won't forget those important things and can complete them before the deadline.

The phrase 'before deadline' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct: 'before the deadline'. This is a common article usage rule in English.