Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with specific examples. Use simple and correct sentences, and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I remember shopping lists and vocabulary words when I study English.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and complete sentences to express your ideas.

Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important once. I was supposed to submit a file to my college, but I forgot to do it, which caused some problems.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember to feed my cat while brushing my teeth and to make phone calls to my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to explain your methods clearly using correct grammar and linking words. Give specific examples of how you remember important things.

Example: I remember important things by repeating them several times and making notes on my phone. This helps me to recall them easily later.

× Nordx making essays by memorizing the categories.

✓ I make essays by memorizing the categories.

The original sentence uses 'making' incorrectly as a present participle without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the simple present tense 'make' to match the subject 'I' and the context of habitual action.

× Such kind of things like shopping.

✓ Such kinds of things like shopping.

The phrase 'Such kind of things' is incorrect because 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple things. Also, 'of' should be used after 'kinds' to correctly link to 'things'.

× Once my dad want of file.

✓ Once my dad wanted a file.

The verb 'want' should be in the past tense 'wanted' to match the past time reference 'once'. Also, 'of file' is incorrect; it should be 'a file' as the object.

× Hello, I have to give him but I've forgotten to submit the file in the college.

✓ I had to give it to him, but I forgot to submit the file to the college.

The sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. 'Hello' is unnecessary. 'I have to give him' lacks an object. 'I've forgotten' should be 'I forgot' to maintain past tense consistency. 'In the college' should be 'to the college' as the file is submitted to the college.

× Even because of my lack of.

✓ Even because of my lack of attention.

The phrase 'lack of' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'attention' clarifies what is lacking.

× The things that I need to remember in my daily drive, like a giving cat of food while brushing and.

✓ The things that I need to remember in my daily routine, like giving a cat food while brushing my teeth, and.

'Daily drive' is incorrect; 'daily routine' is appropriate. 'A giving cat of food' is incorrect; it should be 'giving a cat food'. Also, 'brushing' needs an object, so 'brushing my teeth' is clearer.

× Making a phone calls. For friends etc.

✓ Making phone calls to friends, etc.

'A phone calls' is incorrect; 'phone calls' is plural without an article. 'For friends' should be 'to friends' to indicate the recipient of the calls.

× I often remember important thing by memorizing into an condition, continuously repeating it and making nodes of the things we should be remembered by me.

✓ I often remember important things by memorizing them in a condition, continuously repeating them, and making notes of the things I should remember.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things'. 'Memorizing into an condition' is incorrect; it should be 'memorizing them in a condition'. 'Making nodes' is incorrect; it should be 'making notes'. 'We should be remembered by me' is incorrect; it should be 'I should remember'.

× The important and crucial things that have been noted down in apps or phones are making some nodes.

✓ The important and crucial things that have been noted down in apps or phones are made into some notes.

'Are making some nodes' is incorrect; the passive form 'are made into some notes' is appropriate. Also, 'nodes' should be 'notes'.